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I never expected that he'd ask her to stay at the Manor over the holiday. And I love that he still hasn't figured out he's in over his head with her. :D

So great there is a update before Christmas, thank you so much. The development is steady but why I have a feeling you are going to introduce some angst after the holiday?

Congrats on making the 50,000 word mark in the writing competition - yay you!! :)

Now what the heck is going on in Draco's head??? What an arguement he's having with himself. LOL Not exactly sure what's going on, is he? Just knows that he has to act on something even if he's not sure what. I love his confusion and I love that Hermione is sneaking around just to be with him. The guilt will definitely be eating at her but I can also understand the thrill she has of doing something 'naughty' and out of character. The things we good girls do for the bad boy! LOL

Wow! That was really great!
I love Malfoy's character. He's not too nice and not too bad. I hate it when they write stories about Malfoy being really uncaring and torturing Hermione. It's great to see some love between the two and a nice side of Draco.

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First of all, congrats for entering the writing competition, I wish you the best of luck. :)

For some reason, this chapter made me feel really sad. I suppose because I've made the mistake of confusing lust and love before and at this point, that's exactly where Hermione seems to be. It's as if she 'knows' what the score is, but can't help but delude herself into thinking it could be something more anyway. Of course, I am sure that this particular relationship will end on far better terms but still, there's that lingering empitiness I feel for her because I know how much she wants from him, how much more she needs from him. I don't know if that was the intention but I found this very moving (and of course the teasing and the sex was delish as always - LOL) :)

...that was AMAZING!I'd need a cigarette if I still smoked them! Can't wait for the next chapter even though its gonna be a few weeks! You are so awesome!

Hey lenna,
OMG I am sorry i haven't reviewed for a while, I didn't have internet for a while now, and its nothing against u. I still love u and your fic to death and I have just read chapters 8-12 and I screamed, screamed, passed out on the floor, got up and then screamed some more. You had me completely dumbfounded, it was great, it was brilliantly written, i love the way the story is flowing and I love how the characters are evolving at a sensible pace and not just jumping into things from one day to the next. I loved how hermione and draco's realtionship has grown into something understandable atleast on dont worry my words r the truth and here goes a long ass review:

Chap 8: I love the fact that at the start of this chapter that u have let hermione analyze the situation, with her acknowledging his ingrained characteristics and bad boy emotions and atleast she is thinking positively about all the craziness he has endured and she has comprehended him to a huge extent and that will only be good for thier relationship, and poor draco has definately passed through alot...sniff, sniff...lol.
Anyway at least she is truthful to her reactions and confused emotions for the boy, the boy really has her mind mushhed up...lol, atleast she sees him as a person now. Then u turn to draco's blunt thoughts for the head girl, such a naughty boy...sigh...can I have him...sigh. Anyway he still sees the fact that he needs to keep her hidden from himself, although they bonded on particular level, he seeks to regain his bad boy personna although he wants her badly and somewhere deep down, cares for her.
Potons class had me smiling like a ceshire cat...hahaha, poor hermione, the toying and prodding LOVED IT, i could feel the fire from here. She was sure gaining a independence of his commanding personality and not turning to mush just at the sight of him, and her anger and fiestiness, brilliant, poor draco he prodded tooo hard. The girl was on fire...I LOVED IT, she handed his balls back to him. But I was suprised she went with him that evening though, even if they kept it "professional". But i appreciated the time pass and how he would try to mix things up by sneaking chances in different places and keep her guessing when he would strike, especially on Halloween night, although none of them would acknowledge it that is the way their "relationship" is him needing to appease her by kidnapping her at different places and placating her. Loved it and the ciffly would have killed me had there not been another chapter...lol.

Chap 9: SMUT, SMUT, YUMMY SMUT....I died, it was so fucking hot. Getting ahead of myself...breathe, just keep breathing. OMG that was some insane shit u wrote, it was so sorchingly done, had me screaming for more. But lets start at the beginning shall we...Hermione's nerves must have been shot, I could feel the anxiety, and fear radiating from her to me, at least he was considerate, actually he was very considerate with the meal, and foreplay and the act itself, and especially afterwards. I applaud draco in this one, he held back his snarkiness and gave in to his softer side, but his ego was still in there somewhere, it was all a very hot draco in this chapter.
But now the breakdown: I loved the part where he was remembering teaching her the 69 position, OMG, OMG, do I have to say anything else. The tension building between them was edible, and he really wanted to make her his. But between both of them they would have to admit that this single act was gonna change them forever. Although the Occlumency part was a funny, but at first i was pissed as I though he did it again. I loved the tension and the first kiss of the night was hot. I was constantly fanning myself throughout the entire interlude it was so good.
I also appreciated the fact that Hermione let herself go and just gave into her feelings, even though at the beginning she was scared of the big ole bad bed. malfoy was being his sweet and playful self with a hint just of the ego thrown in...did i mention I Loved him here, especially when the commanding self kicked in and hermione obdiently followed. But during the act, boy they sure had alot of mixed up emotions running through them, alot...it was mind spinning, and I hope they sort themselves out really. Oh and what killed me her was this beautiful knicker-soaking little statement when he told her to open her eyes:

chap 10: The aftermath confrontation between them was not as bad as expected, and I think it fit them and the situation they were in. But the inevitable Ginny confrontation hath come to hand, and I was hoping she wouldn't be a pain in the ass, but u assured me that she wouldn't so i took your word for it. Hermione starting to get her feeling for him to the surface, even if she is still confused, and Ginny wasn't a pain but she just listened and assessed the situation, poor hermione, I think she is more confused and feeling a bit ashamed now. Short and sweet chapter.