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by LennaNightrunner

schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, the first real chink in his self-made security armor! I have been waiting for that for a long while. Until now, he has basically (even if unintentionally) been using her and in many ways abusing her. But, his defenses, built so high I don't even he knows them as such, are finally cracking. I am so glad, as she deserves better.

I love this story and the way you write it. Please keep up the great work! Thanks, HG4eva
person kazfeist
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good to see he's realized what's happened. Can't wait to see if he'll man up and face his feelings, or not. At least he realizes she's worth more than just a shag or two. I'm glad you gave him that much honour, at least. :D Can't wait for more.
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im a horrible reviewer, so forgive me please! But I AM reading this faithfully and I like it very much =) I look forward to Draco's softening, because I really do love a redeemed Draco.


Happy Writing!
SG
person xxbebexx
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg its so cute i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 update plz!
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Even if it wasn't smutty I still loved it! I do kind of wish Draco would open up a little bit more or let Hermoine in just a little bit more...I dunno...I'm sure whatever comes next is gonna be great! Unless you decide to go super angst...then that wouldn't be so great to me. Oh dang I'm rambling...I absolutely love your story!!!
person Ella
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! It was so cute seeing a possesive but kind of normal side to Draco. I can't wait to see what happens in their relationship. It would be kind of cool to see Hermione taking charge once in a while! Brilliant chapter. :D
person Kyra
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's so different from all the other stories! I love how the two are slowley falling in love without each other knowing it, oh, and the smut of course. :D
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was nothing less than perfection! I would have loved to know what he wrote to his mother to allow not only a muggle-born witch into the Malfoy estate, but the best friend of Harry Potter! The banter between them is sublime, and the neck tease kiss, just makes me want to search for your Draco in the daytime with a flashlight!
person Katherine
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been one of my favorite stories of all time of Draco and Hermione. Thank you not only for writing it, but for sharing it. Happy Holidays!
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story, love how you keep Hermione more or less off balance, and how, you keep Draco in a state of paradox, how he can be vicious with Hermione, or how he can be pseudo sweet.