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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please please please post another chapter soon! i stayed up when i should have been sleeping (i'm sick!) just to get through all sixteen chapters. This story is yummy.
clarice.
clarice.
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The letter was perfect, Narcissa's reaction was perfect, hell, Narcissa is perfect! I loved the ettiquette book question! I could always see Hermione reading up on that before going to Malfoy Manor, but hey, can't blame the girl, she's been deliciously distracted! Lucky bitch! *hater* Great chapter, Malfoy at his snarky and sexiest best!
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big fan of your fic and get super excited when I see you've updated! I love your Draco, he's a bastard, but a sexy bastard! Cannot wait to read more :)
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The Holiday visit was a brilliant idea! And I like your chapters without smut as well;)
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter.... I really admire how you have captured both Narcissa and Draco. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH Goodness lenna HAPPY NEW YEAR,
Thank you for the onsite nod to my last set of reviews, and it has been a busy, busy few months for me, thanks for the brand new chapters and I hope the new year is a great and prosperous and safe one for u and your family. And let us all strive to be and do better this year. So now for the main attraction the review of chapter 13.
First of all it was the continuation of the smut in her room, I still love the fact that he was SO eager to see her that he came a day early on a broom...cute...lol. But u have to have no fear with your smut parts beacause it was done brilliantly. The chemistry, just the right amount of dominance from draco, and the total submission to him from hermione, although she doesnt know or realizes the extent of the power that he has over her yet, the actual act is sorching, and very detailed. I loved that they tried something new, and we have arrived at the point that they both are trying to analyze and at the same time not over analyze everything that goes on between them, especially the creeping feelings and emotions that r taking over.
I found that u did everything in great proportion here with the act, the emotion and the naughtiness all in one flow of a chapter, it is clear that draco doesnt want to acknowledge his great need and want for her, and it is clear that hermione is trying to convince herself its just sex but when she secretly wants it to be more. Again I love your draco, it feels like him, dominating and snarky but a hint of caring with lust madness. I especially loved the joke about what he would do if they created a draco junior....lol. I love hermione her as well, the wanton little hussy...lol. It is interesting to see whats gonna happen to them over their holiday, with their lack of contact, I say draco goes mad and pops first, then kidnapps her...lol...rofl.
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Scarlet
Thank you for the onsite nod to my last set of reviews, and it has been a busy, busy few months for me, thanks for the brand new chapters and I hope the new year is a great and prosperous and safe one for u and your family. And let us all strive to be and do better this year. So now for the main attraction the review of chapter 13.
First of all it was the continuation of the smut in her room, I still love the fact that he was SO eager to see her that he came a day early on a broom...cute...lol. But u have to have no fear with your smut parts beacause it was done brilliantly. The chemistry, just the right amount of dominance from draco, and the total submission to him from hermione, although she doesnt know or realizes the extent of the power that he has over her yet, the actual act is sorching, and very detailed. I loved that they tried something new, and we have arrived at the point that they both are trying to analyze and at the same time not over analyze everything that goes on between them, especially the creeping feelings and emotions that r taking over.
I found that u did everything in great proportion here with the act, the emotion and the naughtiness all in one flow of a chapter, it is clear that draco doesnt want to acknowledge his great need and want for her, and it is clear that hermione is trying to convince herself its just sex but when she secretly wants it to be more. Again I love your draco, it feels like him, dominating and snarky but a hint of caring with lust madness. I especially loved the joke about what he would do if they created a draco junior....lol. I love hermione her as well, the wanton little hussy...lol. It is interesting to see whats gonna happen to them over their holiday, with their lack of contact, I say draco goes mad and pops first, then kidnapps her...lol...rofl.
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chapter 14:
That was interesting, and so much for my kidnapping idea, but geez, that was unexpected, I was so shocked that he brought her to the manor. the first few paragraphs, were interesting as we finally see draco's frustration and confusion at his own feelings and his insane decision, the boy will fall on his ass when he finally acknowledges them and realize where this is going. The way he cornered her and demanded in oh so subtle tones for her to come to manner after new years, was the extent I was referring to of his control over her, and she just realizes it a bit, and I think she revels in it...it was hot by the way.
Their interaction when she arrives at the manor is done so perfectly that u painly see the awkwardness, the hint of fear and apprehension from hermione, and the tension between them. It is done brilliantly as neither is faking their emotions but just masking the obvious, they are like the opposite ends of the magnets that naturally attracts, but they r trying by all means to fight it on the emotional front as well as the physical on some parts, and we both know that it is not going to work for very long. I cant wait to see what happens next. And if u r going to let Narcissa and Hermione meet. I cant wait. Great writing.
That was interesting, and so much for my kidnapping idea, but geez, that was unexpected, I was so shocked that he brought her to the manor. the first few paragraphs, were interesting as we finally see draco's frustration and confusion at his own feelings and his insane decision, the boy will fall on his ass when he finally acknowledges them and realize where this is going. The way he cornered her and demanded in oh so subtle tones for her to come to manner after new years, was the extent I was referring to of his control over her, and she just realizes it a bit, and I think she revels in it...it was hot by the way.
Their interaction when she arrives at the manor is done so perfectly that u painly see the awkwardness, the hint of fear and apprehension from hermione, and the tension between them. It is done brilliantly as neither is faking their emotions but just masking the obvious, they are like the opposite ends of the magnets that naturally attracts, but they r trying by all means to fight it on the emotional front as well as the physical on some parts, and we both know that it is not going to work for very long. I cant wait to see what happens next. And if u r going to let Narcissa and Hermione meet. I cant wait. Great writing.
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chapter 15:
OMG, OMG, OMG, the shit has hit the cieling and it stinks...lol. I was right, I knew when they both realized that their realtionship whould become something more by their nagging emotion, that they would be dumbfounded. All I have to say for this one is that the piper has beckoned and now its time to pay up. Emotions, emotions, emotions. *shakes head*, they r both fucked, bring on the drama. Great writing as always. Update soon.
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OMG, OMG, OMG, the shit has hit the cieling and it stinks...lol. I was right, I knew when they both realized that their realtionship whould become something more by their nagging emotion, that they would be dumbfounded. All I have to say for this one is that the piper has beckoned and now its time to pay up. Emotions, emotions, emotions. *shakes head*, they r both fucked, bring on the drama. Great writing as always. Update soon.
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems like Draco's either gotta shit or get off the pot soon huh? I can deal with angst I'm wary of tragedy though!lol anyways I'm still so hooked on this story I can't wait for more
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! Draco's internal conflict is appealing. He's finally seeing what Hermione wants, but is unsure of how to reciprocate. Will there be more angst? Will Draco attempt to give Hermione what she wants? I can't wait to read the next chapter!