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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was very enlighting on how Draco's mind work and what he wants... Keep them coming....
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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated! And it's good to see the relationship is finally taking its toll on Draco. I look forward to seeing how you show the power of love vis-a-vis the Dark Mark, though. Should be interesting. :D
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story! Your portrayal of Draco is amazing - not too cruel, not too kind, and just the right amount of dominance ;)
This last chapter was especially intense cos you can tell they're getting emotional about each other. & the fantasy re-enactment was *fans self* hot!
Update soon~
This last chapter was especially intense cos you can tell they're getting emotional about each other. & the fantasy re-enactment was *fans self* hot!
Update soon~
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so amazing! It's been a very long time since a fanfic held my attention this raptly. I simply can't stop reading it. Very VERY well done!
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lenna,
Hope u r well and geez, that was a very tension filled dinner, i must say u have done narcissa well alot better than alot of the other fics I have read i think u have gotten her cannon. U should have no fear on the matter the first part was great I love how draco could see his mother's claws, and i was a bit dissappointed in hermione I wanted her to have the brave lioness attitude but not to much just some to make narcissa's claws retract. Not that your senario didnt fit the story dont get me wrong I loved what happened between them it was just the right akward and demanding first meeting, I just wanted a little more "ummph" from hermione maybe the next meeting eh...lol.
But u know how I have to say something to that second part, it was just so yummy, and erotic, oh my word, and I think I keep telling you how much I love your draco, u have no idea the depth of my words, my fics that I am currently writing I am striving to emmulate your draco's personality as one of five fics that I absolutely adore and reverie and think that their draco is so close to cannon....lol. So you inspire me alot lenna and I hope u like my madness when I upload them. The chemistry and underlying emotions are so thick and potent that I loose myself in your words sometimes and I could feel your draco, so do not dispair u have the right vibe. I cant wait to read more, and the plot is just as equally done, and I cant wait to see where all this is going because they have said to each other that they are not stopping if they r found out, that is very serious and I dont think they caught on to how serious things are between them. keep up the brilliant work and update soon.
Respect
Scarlet
Hope u r well and geez, that was a very tension filled dinner, i must say u have done narcissa well alot better than alot of the other fics I have read i think u have gotten her cannon. U should have no fear on the matter the first part was great I love how draco could see his mother's claws, and i was a bit dissappointed in hermione I wanted her to have the brave lioness attitude but not to much just some to make narcissa's claws retract. Not that your senario didnt fit the story dont get me wrong I loved what happened between them it was just the right akward and demanding first meeting, I just wanted a little more "ummph" from hermione maybe the next meeting eh...lol.
But u know how I have to say something to that second part, it was just so yummy, and erotic, oh my word, and I think I keep telling you how much I love your draco, u have no idea the depth of my words, my fics that I am currently writing I am striving to emmulate your draco's personality as one of five fics that I absolutely adore and reverie and think that their draco is so close to cannon....lol. So you inspire me alot lenna and I hope u like my madness when I upload them. The chemistry and underlying emotions are so thick and potent that I loose myself in your words sometimes and I could feel your draco, so do not dispair u have the right vibe. I cant wait to read more, and the plot is just as equally done, and I cant wait to see where all this is going because they have said to each other that they are not stopping if they r found out, that is very serious and I dont think they caught on to how serious things are between them. keep up the brilliant work and update soon.
Respect
Scarlet
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, just marvelously awesome. The smut scenes are just wonderful. You should write more... seriously. God, I just wish and wish and wish I am Hermione Granger. I think Narcissa is perfect, that is just what I imagined Mrs. Malfoy to be. You did a great job. I'm looking forward for the next chapter!
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I 'm totally feel'n this fic. God I can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13: Smut aside.... THIS really got me:
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The dinner was amazing! So tense! Narcissa was perfectly polite, but therin lies the lies all the delicious tension! Hermione would relax and be suprised at the "innocent" questions, only to put her guard up at the next one, just to relax a bit again! Quite the roller coaster! Excellent job!
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh ho ho ho ho! You have these two falling hard. it's delicious and wonderful! I was shocked that you brought her to Malfoy Manor to meet mom! And what a great exchange it was! This is really excellent! I ADORED the rejected hug...painful but so real. And the war... over spinach and endive salad.!!!!!!!!! Go Girl! That rocked!