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I've never seen anybody explain Lucius' side so thoroughly that you can sympathize with him! I was reading like, *sniff* "Yea, turn over the mudblood!" Brilliant scene between the couple, esp with Narcissa torn between her love for husband and son! People seem to forget that the couple came before the kid, and yea sometimes thats a hard choice. Narcissa is really going through it! And the train scene, *guh* I love how they need each other! Oh, my, oh, my what will happen now?

that was a great chapter! really looking forward to the next...

*long sigh* ahhh another great chapter!!! and u kept ur word didnt have to wait too long :) u already know what i'm going to say but i'll say it anyways lol keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Ok, this is good so we need more more more... ty

I've finally decided to stop being hypocritical and review! Another excellent chapter. I love the way you have written Narcissa and Lucius. I have always thought it was more him than her with the prejudice, and I prefer it when they are written that way. Draco chose Hermione! I'm glad he did; you never can tell in these stories whether he will or whether he won't and goes back to her at a later date. Looking forward to see how this unfolds...and I hope your roll continues for a while!!

Hi lenna,
*HUGS* and squeals.
OMG this chapter was intense so much emotion so much tension I was reading it through my hands covering my face in fear. i was so surprised when tonks revealed the situation to hermione that they know, and I am glad she stood her ground and defended their messed up relationship. I was surprised remus and mad eye didnt rush in and take her from malfoy manor when they found out that she was there. However tonks wants to look at hermione i am proud of her stance so much. And oh god that second part with the malfoy men I could have died the way it all went down so calmly and tension filled between them and i was through the roof with draco hid his emotions well and still stood up for his mudblood but Lord I am frightened as to what he will do with his father's ultimatium. Brilliant and suspenseful chapter and it is going so well I love it all.
I hope u r well my friend and sorry for the late review as I mentioned I was moving and i am still not settled but I had to review so i hope u r well. Update soon

Respect
Scarlet

Please let me assure you that I would never say a bad word about any fics, especially yours. I don't believe in it. If a story is not for me, I don't read it, I don't leave a review just to bag it. And if I love a story, well, I tend to waffle on a bit as you well know by now. LOL

I most definitely mean 'complicated' in a good way because you have me so intrigued by him and wondering what he is going to do next. I like that I haven't been able to fully figure out what he's going to do next. And please, if I say something that doesn't make sense or if I have offended you, ask me about it because I would never do anything like that deliberately. Would I defend your story if someone else bagged it, absolutely, but that would be the only time. :)

Now I'll get off the soap box and just let out a very long breath! I mean, wow, everything happened so fast I'm not sure even Hermione fully realised what had happened. And I was worried for her when that knock on the door sounded. I certainly didn't expect to see Tonks on the other side. Love how she grumbled about Mad Eye's 'constant vigelance' but did it anyway. LOL

And oh how embarrassing that the older members of the Order know all about her little liason with Draco. Hardly something you'd want to hear. And how guilty did Tonks make her feel about what has been happening between her and Draco even if she doesn't completely understand it herself. Tonks is right though, if you're hiding something and you're ashamed of being found out, it means no end of trouble, I hope Hermione can see that side of it too.

And as for Draco - how awful to have felt like he was the wizard of the house for so long only to have his father return as imposing as ever and make him feel like a child again. I think he stood up to him brilliantly though and showed that he was capable of making a decision for himself and that 'daddy' didn't like that at all. Now I have to wait and see who won this latest ultimatum.

Oh and I think all your chapters end with cliffies because I can't wait to read the next one every time. :)

Brilliant!!!! OMG i'm sooooo excited for moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee =]]]] I'm glad i make you smile caz you sure make meeee smile!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D

I love it. I love how deluded you have Lucius, and how he's still not changed. I love, however, how Draco has changed. I love how he can still remain neutral. Great chapter, and personally, that cliffhanger was *fabulous*. You've really furthered the plot along very well, with the whole interaction between Draco and Lucius. Tonks, hmm I love how you've made her into such a wild card. I am intrigued at how she's going to be played out. Great chapter!!

I've been reading this story since the first chapter and have never reviewed. Sorry! I must have missed the last update, so I got to read the chapters 19 and 20 in one sitting. Good thing too, because I would have never survived that Lucius cliffhanger in 19. Wow! Chapter 20 was wow-worthy as well. Even though Draco and Hermione didn't have any interaction in that one, I felt I got a lot of insight into their feelings. Hermione's defense and certainity that Draco would never betray her. Draco's worry for Hermione, but hope that he may not feel too much for her because it's dangerous for them both. I love this story! I love all the yummy smut, all the tender feelings, and now all the action and plotting with the breakout.