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Loved your story, rough and smutty at first, which I love, but delicate and sensitive. All in all perfect. I noticed this is your one and only story, shame....

just to say i love this fic its all ive read for the past two days well sine last night anyway and just to say it takes a lot more than that to squick me out hehe xD xx yeah this is one osoim story

im finished and i loveeeee it!!!!!!!!!!!! yes it is just that awesome great stroy great smut great ending what else could you want

Simply one of the best dramione fanfics!

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Thank you for this wonderful story... up to chapter 28

You did really a great job on this but I frankly say: The last 2 chapters doesn't fit to the otherwise great story. No I don't need another ending. All would be OK, I would accept tragedy or happy ending or any other but this one is just "wrong".

Why? Because it doesn't make sense. The characters do not act, as you pictured them. Draco cannot go without Hermione for 7 days but then doesn't do nothing do get her back?
Hermione is in love with Draco but gets married to Ron (and that for years), unexplained in any way? As we know Herione wouldn't do such fundamental wrong things without reason & explanation which the reader never gets.

I better not say a word on the timewarp thing. We all read the day by day events Draco & Hermione experience and then BANG: A lot of not-to-understand things happen. I personally hate these timewarps in any story - but perhaps that's just me.

Sorry, I don't want to be rude or bashing anything. The story is some years on AFF and I don't know if anyone cares anyway.

So finally I come back to my congratulations: Great writing, a lot of great scenes and chapters. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks alot!

Looks like this could be an interesting story...looking forward to seeing where this is going...but the chapters (of course i am only on ch 3) seem to be too short, rather than that So far I like it.

I really enjoyed the story
Thank you for writing such an amazing story

This is probably the best fanfic ive ever read, thankyou so much for writing it. The characters are so complex and believable. I have to admit, the seduction in the first few chapters is very similar to what I want for myself, but I dont think i will ever get that, damn! I hope you write more fics in the future. Im looking forward to reading this fic again after a while, I want to see if its just as good the second time around.

Yay! That was marvelous, believable and well-written. Thank you for one of my favorite stories on this site!