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for Smoldering Glance

by FelineKitten

schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I assumed you were going to write him catching her getting off with the wee beastie. Which is what I meant in my previous review. My questions now is, is Draco using magic so that she can't reach her previous heights of pleasure or is he so fantastic in her dreams that subconsciously she can't get off on anything but him?
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't *wait* to see what happens next....
person smmz79
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow so we are moving along huh... i just love those dreams that she has they are so erotic and hot.... and they are definitely building up to some explosive sex and hot tension... and she is being attacked by students or is draco behind this so that he can get closer to her.... wow i am totally excited about your update please update soon
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are a tease!!! So can't wait now.....
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok this was weird, but well written and I honestly did like it! Can't wait for the next update!
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
K; a very hot offering. Have you read the Hermione centric story Tentacles?? The first one is about Hermione and the squid. Really really hot story, its also found here. Can't wait to see what happens next....
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Who knew that such a naughty beastie lurked in the waters of Hogwarts. I wonder Draco reaction is going to be when he finds out her dirty little habit.
person smmz79
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm i really like this story it is very interesting... i love the dreams that she is having and the fact that draco knows what she does that should prove to be one steamy love scene between them
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that is a very very very *hawt* beginning. I ask you to continue!!
person smmz79
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow what a fab peek... i loved it just the promise of his love and the power of his need just mindblowing