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for Her Romp with Centaurs

by PensievePerson

schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My god.

This is without a doubt, hilarious! >.> Although I think perhaps you are trying to force the hilarity a bit too much in this? What with the kittens I mean... I will never see her doilies the same way again . .. >.< . .

Very good start by the way, and now that you mention it, it does make sense she was raped.... my mind just never went there . . .
person sjauthor
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...Umbridge is turning into a beast herself!
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pretty good
person xsx
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastic
person sjauthor
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe...serves her right!

I am surprised Bane was up for that, as he is quite good-looking and she is horrible! But I guess he's just teaching her a lesson.

As usual, you are displaying great knowledge of the HP characters. I imagine she'd indeed wear underwear like that. And the doilies...ugh! So she doesn't want children... That's one relieve for the wizarding world! :)

Great job, Pensieve.