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Hilarious. Poor centaurs who fucked Umbridge though. Ugh! I am still laughing over the ass kicking!

I liked the first chapter!
It's all taken as a bit of a joke and humourous but i also think it's very kinky and i liked it!

i half-expected you to have the centaurs vie with each other to NOT have to be the one to rape umbridge! >snort< i very much enjoyed the fact that you wrote this at the humorous end of the spectrum; but now you've started me thinking about what the story could be like if it took place at the other, much darker end...and will you look at that, it's the start of the christmas hols and i have all this free time to write! hmmm. (if i do go there i will definitely credit you with giving me the idea!)

To Mamacita:

Thanks for commenting. I already thought the story was dark as well as humorous. I couldn't see it getting darker unless you stray from canon. To make it darker, there would be more violence and maybe they'd kill Umbridge? That did not happen in canon. In my opinion, the story is fine as it stands. Adding to much of anything is always a bad thing, as Shakespeare says. Yes, I thought of other crazy details, but I thought they would be too much.

But go ahead if you want. I will not mind. It's not within my rights to complain and I understand it's truly not my property, except for the replica I wrote here.

definitely one of the most unusual hp fics ive ever read:) not sure that dumbles deserved compassion from anyone after what she had done at the school though . . . *bitter! party of one!*

Thanks for the review, Slashslut. I appreciate it. It is my most unusual story, and I think it extremely likely that it happened. In fact, in my mind it did happen! Now the compassion...it is something I think only Dumbledore would show for Umbridge. He is still capable of feeling sorry for her, yet he was also firm with her. He told her off about being High Inquisitor! He told her he's in power, not her.

I didn't read it but I must say the idea for the fan fiction was very good. If I was in to this kind of thing I'd be all over it.

Thanks 'rejected' for the note. I'm not all over it either, but I definitely did the best job I could with this idea, whilst keeping it simple! :)

"At the word

This is a unique look at centaur society. I really enjoyed this chapter, found it particularly amusing how Bane was trying to press the issue of butchering Umbridge. I'm surprised at her insolence towards the centaurs, she's rather brave, or shall we say stupid; for one in her uncompromising position.