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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yup i was right. lyrical. severus is very much himself and it shows. more please
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yup i was right. lyrical. severus is very much himself and it shows. more please
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can not find the link for the rest of this story please alert me Slm8364@aol.com when it is ready Thank you
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that is interesting story
hmmmm....is there more coming or is this the end?
I would really like to know please email me at sheep_mcirvin@yahoo.com
ewe
hmmmm....is there more coming or is this the end?
I would really like to know please email me at sheep_mcirvin@yahoo.com
ewe
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please post the next part. I look forward to finding out why Snape was with Draco and what his reaction will be when he finds out his husband is gone (and possibly dead).
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, sad but wonderful.
Please post the other chapters!
You can always change things afterwards if you really feel like it.
Please post the other chapters!
You can always change things afterwards if you really feel like it.
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please go on writing! the story is really good and moreover reeeeaaaally sad... i even cried...please, write on!
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story,
but THE HELL! if you've written the story -POST IT!!!!-
i HATE the i've finished the story i'll post it in sections, either you've written the story to your satisfaction and post it knowing that you can't please everyone and if there are mistakes or inconsistencies that you can go back and fix as needed.
OR you are so desperate to please everyone that you simply don't have the BALLS to post what you've created.
AND that you're so desperate for everyone to like your story that the first contradicting flame that you get will make you stop posting all together!!
OR EVEN change what WOULD have been a WONDERFUL and INTERESTING story just to please the few junior high students (who are on the site under false pretense but by some of the author's grammar and plots you KNOW that's where they are) who whine that you should put this that AND the other in "'cause the story would be so much 'better' if only...".
I've been reading fanfics for a LONG time almost 10 YEARS now and I've seen MANY authors who try this and ALL of their storys' first and even up the third chapters are wonderful, THEN they change to please the reader and the plots disintegrate and some lose interest and others just keep spewing this unpalatable "literature" - if you could even call it that.
And SORRY for the rant but this is such a GOOD story i would absolutely abhor something like that happening to it, it has so very much potential.
I'm also not saying don't post it in sections, by all means take your sweet time! -Just don't change what you've written!!!! you have more writing talent on the tips of you hair than 90% of all the readers not to mention the few of those who will be reviewing (i'm sad to say that it is NOT an accurate percent representation)
So take heart know you will have die-hard fans if the QUALITY of your writing and plots stay even remotely in the same place they are now.
Sincerely, Enthusiastically, Honestly, Rantingly, Yours,
Megan L.
p.s. please respond to my review I would like to know if i should keep up with reading it, if my review made any impact or if you took it as a flame without reading it all the way through, or disregarded entirely.
but THE HELL! if you've written the story -POST IT!!!!-
i HATE the i've finished the story i'll post it in sections, either you've written the story to your satisfaction and post it knowing that you can't please everyone and if there are mistakes or inconsistencies that you can go back and fix as needed.
OR you are so desperate to please everyone that you simply don't have the BALLS to post what you've created.
AND that you're so desperate for everyone to like your story that the first contradicting flame that you get will make you stop posting all together!!
OR EVEN change what WOULD have been a WONDERFUL and INTERESTING story just to please the few junior high students (who are on the site under false pretense but by some of the author's grammar and plots you KNOW that's where they are) who whine that you should put this that AND the other in "'cause the story would be so much 'better' if only...".
I've been reading fanfics for a LONG time almost 10 YEARS now and I've seen MANY authors who try this and ALL of their storys' first and even up the third chapters are wonderful, THEN they change to please the reader and the plots disintegrate and some lose interest and others just keep spewing this unpalatable "literature" - if you could even call it that.
And SORRY for the rant but this is such a GOOD story i would absolutely abhor something like that happening to it, it has so very much potential.
I'm also not saying don't post it in sections, by all means take your sweet time! -Just don't change what you've written!!!! you have more writing talent on the tips of you hair than 90% of all the readers not to mention the few of those who will be reviewing (i'm sad to say that it is NOT an accurate percent representation)
So take heart know you will have die-hard fans if the QUALITY of your writing and plots stay even remotely in the same place they are now.
Sincerely, Enthusiastically, Honestly, Rantingly, Yours,
Megan L.
p.s. please respond to my review I would like to know if i should keep up with reading it, if my review made any impact or if you took it as a flame without reading it all the way through, or disregarded entirely.
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read it a second time..
It's so great!
I'm checking at least 5 times a day whether there is an update or not!
So pleaaaaase update soon!!!
It's so great!
I'm checking at least 5 times a day whether there is an update or not!
So pleaaaaase update soon!!!
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love forced bond fics and also unrequited love and depressed Harry. So you've put the goodies in one story for me ;). I really can't wait for the next parts!!