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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! Honestly one of the best Snarry fics I've read in a long time. :)
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for new chapter.snape jealous harry but he have sex some students.especially he have sex with draco then kiss him.i think snape love draco than harry.i really hate snape and draco.i think snape not sorry harry' left.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, anxious to see what happens next. does harry actually succeed to commit suicide or will he be found in time
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapters 1 & 2)
I love your writing style, the way the story is told, and I love it that you have the story from both Harry and Severus' points of view. Just excellent all the way round, and I am very much looking forward to the next update. I hope Severus wil find Harry in time, I hope that they will talk to one another about what they saw the other do, even if it is an argument, just so they communicate.
If you have an update alert mailing list for this story, please add me to it! jilliantpr@yahoo.com
I love your writing style, the way the story is told, and I love it that you have the story from both Harry and Severus' points of view. Just excellent all the way round, and I am very much looking forward to the next update. I hope Severus wil find Harry in time, I hope that they will talk to one another about what they saw the other do, even if it is an argument, just so they communicate.
If you have an update alert mailing list for this story, please add me to it! jilliantpr@yahoo.com
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I definately am interested in this story. I was getting right into it and it finished! GAH! Anyhow email me when you update, I must read more... gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow-- this is a real tear-jerker. Very emotional and raw. I was thrown off by the style at first, but I've gotten used to it. I do think some of the sentences need to be revised though-- do you have a beta? It seems like sometimes words are misused or missing entirely-- fixing those errors will help the flow of the story. Nice job so far, I'll be watching for more!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well it was great to have Severus POV and confirm that he had indeed seen Harry and Ron kiss however I can not shake the feeling that while we were reading this Harry was daying. Is that crazy or what?
Will Harry's note prompt Severus to look for him? I wonder if he will just asume Harry left with Ron. In that case who is going to find him? Somebody is going to find him;right? AAAhhh the stress!
Please do go and save Harry so I can start worrying about how on earth is Severus going to explain that he had sex with Harry's nemesis because he thought Harry was being unfaithful. I cannot imagine Harry instantly forgiving that.
Can you tell I am enjoying this?
Will Harry's note prompt Severus to look for him? I wonder if he will just asume Harry left with Ron. In that case who is going to find him? Somebody is going to find him;right? AAAhhh the stress!
Please do go and save Harry so I can start worrying about how on earth is Severus going to explain that he had sex with Harry's nemesis because he thought Harry was being unfaithful. I cannot imagine Harry instantly forgiving that.
Can you tell I am enjoying this?
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus (and poor Harry). It was nice to read this from Sev's point of view.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I hope there will be more! This is beautiful!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yet again, I am in love with this chapter. The only thing that could have made this a bit better is to add dialogue in places, just to keep the story line current in the readers' mind. Either way, this is great, and I can't wait until next Sunday or Monday. Love it!