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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an interesting side story. Makes one want to follow Draco's growth from spoiled brat to a confident and conscientious man. Nicely done.
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome! i love the way this is written. :D
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was nice seeing things from Draco's POV. Thanks for the PS.
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fifth chapter was such a pleasant surprise, what a treat! Draco was desperately loney, it broke my heart to see him pretend not wanting to be loved or respected. The way he resigned himself to the possibility of being like his father, in the same manner one would a genetic desease was positively the sadest thing I've read in a long time.
This chapte however made me dislike Severus quite a lot; this young man had been his student for seven years and while it is true that Draco pursued him and is very good at hiding his feelings (even from himself), I find it selfish and iresponsible that a teacher would use a student in such a way. Thinking back he was not much better to Harry.
Darn you are a good writer! You kept Severus in character (he was an ass) but somehow we did not object too much because we were busy watching him thru Harry's eyes. What a difference it makes when we see thing thru someone elses eyes. I could go on about this, probably because this chapter made me think (it hurt!) but I am sure what you really want to hear is that we liked it. I did, a lot.
This chapte however made me dislike Severus quite a lot; this young man had been his student for seven years and while it is true that Draco pursued him and is very good at hiding his feelings (even from himself), I find it selfish and iresponsible that a teacher would use a student in such a way. Thinking back he was not much better to Harry.
Darn you are a good writer! You kept Severus in character (he was an ass) but somehow we did not object too much because we were busy watching him thru Harry's eyes. What a difference it makes when we see thing thru someone elses eyes. I could go on about this, probably because this chapter made me think (it hurt!) but I am sure what you really want to hear is that we liked it. I did, a lot.
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I got lost in that little world you created. Thanks for that.
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hullo!
Thanks for the story, I thought it was an exellent read so I came to pat you on the back!
First of all, I thought the characterization was great, especially on Albus Dumbledore. You made him sound like he was so used to running everybody's lives that he doesn't even know why he's doing it anymore.
Thanks for the story, I thought it was an exellent read so I came to pat you on the back!
First of all, I thought the characterization was great, especially on Albus Dumbledore. You made him sound like he was so used to running everybody's lives that he doesn't even know why he's doing it anymore.
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that ending was just great and I am looking forward to what you are going to add to this story
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Work! Keep it up ^_^
Jan
Jan
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. It's a great story. Full of emontions and misunterstanding. At the mid of the story I saw no happy ending, but the last chapter put a constant smile on my face.
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice ending! I am glad to see they worked things out! I liked how it end from Cluadia's perspective as well.