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Amazing! I absolutely love this story! It was an awesome way to end it from Claudia's pov too. I actually teared up a little. Thanks for writing!
-Sam

I have to say... I read this story last night and stayed up till after for in the morning it I was so addicted to reading it. Actually I feel like reading it again! Sometimes I run across a story where its so clear how the character feels that I ache for them and what they are going through... usually when they feel they are going to lose something precious. And that what you managed to do with this story... quite a few times actually with Harry and Snape! This is a truly wonderful story and I loved reading it. I liked how you wrote a story for Draco too. I always like to see him have a happy ending because he's always seemed so tragic to me. Awesome :)

poor nev anddraco hopefully draco will recover....

Ok I am very happy for an update. Hope more is to come soon please. I hope Draco realizes the difference between using and someone who truly cares for you

Your story is very charming in many ways. The emotions are genuine and compelling the reader to read, the emotions carry through to the reader in the story and that is what makes your story really good. (some spelling and grammer would help tell a better story but all in all very charming.)

Neville and Draco, it's a concept I can't say I have ever thought of, but strangely it's working really well in this story.

Good Job.

First of all, great fic. You, sir/madam, have reminded me why I still read Snarry fanfiction. I especially loved how Snape was portrayed. I felt like their relationship was rendered very realistically. Severus for all of his good qualities can, canonically, be a bastard. And you don't shy away from that or try to gloss it over like some other authors and I truly appreciate that. As far as Harry goes, he is OOC but not in a bad way. You made it work and fit well with the story but you didn't gut him out and implant a new personality. His core traits and values are still there which was why it was awesome. I am quite interested to see where this whole Draco/Neville will go exactly and whether or not Draco will be able to move on. You've painted him as a very classic tortured whore, like in the book 'Mysterious Skin': when confronted with extreme abuse, either you curl up and reject the experience or you go wild with the knowledge. Draco is pretty wild but is none the worse for it. Overall, kudos for such an awesome fic. You rock, TheSiner and don't forget it.

(Now that all the good things have been said, I would like to paraphrase the classic game of Mortal Kombat: Finish it!)

And here i thought this one was complete. I guess when plot bunnies bite it's best to roll with it. ^^
I'm glad malfoy has someone to look out for him and thaqt Harry is big enough to not try and interfere, even if he can't forgive malfoy yet. Nev's the sort who'd do it too. Look out for someone like that i mean, even if he didn't fancy malfoy.

Hi, I very much enjoyed your story!
I read few infidelity fics, because they are heartbreaking and I think it's the kind of hurt that doesn't go away quickly (and therefore screw up my happy endings). I loved your Harry, his vulnurability and strength. Yet, I think I'd like to read such a fic as yours where Harry is not so perfect and reasonable. I'd like to see Harry lash out, maybe take Severus back, but making him pay. It would certainly make for a more screwed up relationship, but I think after this kind of betrayal it takes a long time for trust and forgiveness to be reestablished. I'd like to see Snape take Harry's cruelty or pettiness without complain, because he knows he caused it... An then, Big Turning Point with lots of forgiveness and then Huge Happy End :) I like angsty stuff, but I definetly need the happy ending! By the way, I liked this last chapter about Draco. Obviously, one sides with Harry first and doesn't want Draco to be anything but evil and deserving of brutal death. But reality is different, no person is completely evil, and most are screwed up. I liked that you made a point of humanising Draco, even though he got stuck with the ungrateful role of 'the other man'.

Interesting ending, though a little off, I still loved it ^_^

It's good to see that both Draco and Neville have each other *winks* Though I would of liked it better if you went a bit more in-depths, there in the ending of them pairing with each other. Great Job!!!!

Jan