rate_review Reviews

Wow, this was really your first fic? Its really good. I especially like the Epilogue. It overall went really fast and was a little scatterbrained, but overall pretty well written. Good job!

The story was awesome! i loved the feeling of the story and the Fairy Tales was a great metaphor for their lives. great job in general!

TY for this story. It was wonderful

Goodnes you work fast!

I like the way everything was workout in a simple and practical way but without leaving loose ends. A very good start, hope to see your next story sometime in the near future.

Wonderful ending to a really good story, totally enjoyed it

I didn't review earlier? Must have been tired. I could have sworn I did. Well anyway, bit is different story for something so common. Got to love Snarry. But Snape wanting to have a kid, that's something new. Well, something I haven't read. I just love Ron's last line where he asks who else would be the best man. That made me laugh. I think the Malfoy's gave in too easily though. Then again, with the right PR, having the wedding really cound improve their social standing. And I love Draco and Amanda. That was just a cute interaction between Draco and Harry. Harry's so cheesy, dragging Snape out of bed to propose. I love it.

yea! I am glad in this story that ron is taking the news well. nice change from the norm of other fics. so will draco get a happy ending as well? I hope so.

I just read all eleven chapters and enjoy all of them. The eleventh chapter made me laugh (Severus loo's comments) and cry. The story is fast pased but does not feel rushed and while the boys have their angsty moments it is never too dramatic. Oh and the childrens stories were a very nice touch.


The scene were Draco begs Severus to marry him was also very sad and while I understand the story is not about him, it is hard not to think about desperate plea.


I am trully enjoying this and no doubt will also like what comes next.

BEAUTIFUL

I really love this story - only read the first chapter but I'm sure going to read the rest, lol - problem is you have a lot of typos and spelling errors, like 'course' instead of 'cause' and 'is' rather than 'his'. No matter, it's a really unique plot and you kept the characters in character, it's really good!