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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3 Harry is right to be nervous about Snape wanting a child. Everything we've read about the man seems to indicate that he HATES children. This is definitely a switch.
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4 The original tale of the mermaid ended rather badly. Mute beauty loses its charm rather quickly. Her prince turned to another and she threw herself into the waves. She became something like an Angel afterwards but one bound in a lengthy servitude before she could achieve fully divinity. Sucked to be her!
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6 I admit that I am warming to your version of Snape
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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice plot!
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December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful......it just good for words
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good story
i hope you will keep on writing and may bey write a sequel
keep going and post soon
bye bye
i hope you will keep on writing and may bey write a sequel
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! I loved it!
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read the story and loved it. I'm a Snarry fan too and I think you should write more.
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I think this was a really sweet and beautiful story, I just loved it, I really like Sarry where Severus is kind of insecure, that makes him so adorable!!!!!Well, CONGRATULTIONS OF THIS FIRST STORY, hope you write lots and lots more, and if possible with a little bite more of smut lol, I