rate_review Reviews

not bad. I like this story. I think it should be contniued. I bet there is a lot more that can be explored between the two of them than has been.

Okay, first of all I want you to know that you made me late for work. Ten till I had to leave my house, I check my email and see your update. So I just had to quickly read it, making me late. I don't regret it though, at all. Totally worth the verbal tongue lashing. ;)

I love that we see more of Snape in this chapter sub!Snape is one of the hottest kinks in Snarry fandom. Just the thought of the man in a collar... *shudder.*

Also, this made me laugh out loud.

"Harry opened his mouth, fully intending to say something that would express his admiration and respect for the man in front of him.

I'd like to hear something from Snape's point of view. Is this relationship just about sex? Is it just a fling?

OMG!!!! CONTINUE PLEASE!!!! PLEASE!!!! PLEASE!!!!

LOL@

You should i love it

That first chapter. Oh my goodness... I'm in total disbelief and stunned hilarity at what you did to Severus. You must be really tired of making him out to be angsty in "Ashes" lol to make you do this 180. Wow. I love your parodies...

Should you continue?

As long as Severus continues to bottom... YES!!!

Please continue, I'd like to see where you go.

LOL@at Ch. 2. OMG, there were so many lines that were funny. lol@Snape's mosquito repellent charm. I love that Harry is a player in denial and that he thinks he's in love after one day with Sev. Loved the spanking and the sneaky way they got into it by talking about mosquitoes..lol. lol@harry coming in sev's mouth and then jumping up and leaving like that...and then asking neville about it. neville is funny too and a stud..Ginny AND Luna? go Neville. so Harry's moving in now? LOL. Next chapter please!