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schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! @Ch. 4. great way to discover your wandless magical powers! Snape cracks me up in this...got bored and needed a piss...lol. And I love how much Harry can't control himself around Snape even though he's the one that's supposed to be the one in control. Neville showing up to dispose of the body was hilarious! Where do you think of this stuff...lol. We'll see what Harry says when he comes to...great and funny chapter Em.
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL@the staircases and portraits stopped moving!! And Snape telling Harry to chill and smoke a joint....I'm glad they had the love vs. lust discussion and that Snape is not gonna be played...he is training Harry isn't he. Who's the dom again? lol. Yay, they're living together..will they make it? Love this story, it's really funny, cute, and sexy.
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL...WOW...SHOT DOWN!!!
person llyoung
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love Severus's last lines in chapter 4 - so very very funny.
person Anon Ym
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"the staircases in the school stopped shifting, and the portraits ceased moving and talking. It was very unsettling"

That is interesting...

Besides that, it is great!!
person Chi No Hana
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want what you're smoking!
person k9asylum
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that was FUNNY!!!!!!

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Severus frowned.
person padme82
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Neville, dick move. I can kind of understand where he's coming from, what with the build up from the last few chapters and Harry's feelings of guilt but still. I hope Neville was joking with that last line.

I mean, I'm a girl but I never, ever cock-block my guys friends. *shudders*

Oh, btw, awesome chapter. Short but sweet and I'm glad Harry got one up on Snape. Sub!Snape but is one of my biggest kinks, especially when he's submissive but not weak. There's a line.

person Black Nightshade7
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great new story.
I wouldn't mind if it would be continued;-)...it would be great..
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i want sev and harry happy with babies and alll