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by padme82

person Iralima
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have Sleepwalker by Nightwish stuck in my head now <.< Did you get the title from those lyrics or was that accidental?

Anyway! Thank you for updating :) good to see Severus is totally committed now. I'm just wondering what the plan will be for this fic's Great Battle *squirms in excitement* (although another chapter of steamy/domestic scenes wouldn't hurt either... reality is painful)
person Krysty
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
........There are no words.......
I feel so bad for them!
They just got together....ish, they have ten days together, and now....yeah....sadness.
But Harry is right, there is work to be done. Then him and Sev can be forever together.
This chapter is a lot to take in, which is good because it really makes you think. What will they plan to get old Voldie? Will the lovers be separated? How will they avoid being caught? It's awesome.
And it's so, so, so well written, and the characters are still sooo in character! You are so amazing!!!!
Thank you sooo much for updating and for continually sharing this with us!

~Blissful Spirit^_^
person landra02
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I love your story, it's one of the best stories I've ever read! Right now it is really frustrating to know that the next chapter is not up yet but I'll wait as patiently as possible!! The plot is captivating to say the least and the characters, especially their reactions and the development of their emotions, are well thought through.
Actually I would love to be added to your updating list^^ my email: hitsuji02@googlemail.com
schedule March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo good. *drools* More!
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww I'm sure it was very tempting to stay in that happy bubble. It's strange though, I could have sworn I've read this chapter already... must be losing my mind in my old age. :P
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
**guh** Lovely, hot, shiver-inducing sex there.

I know there's a war going on outside their door, but all I want to do is see more of them tucked up in bed together! You're making it so beautifully rich and warm between them that it's hard to want anything else.

person QueenB
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 32 I
person SamHill
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay for being back on your game! I was so excited when I saw the update, but I only just now had a chance to read it.

Dead!Ron makes me sad. But I'm glad that things are going strong between Harry and Severus. Loved this update.
person bookbinder
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awsome. A slightly different take on the usual HP/SS bonding fics.
Certainly one of the best I've ever read. Love the characterizations.
And KUDOS for Bruch's violin concerto. It's so terribly underestimated,
hardly anybody who's not activly playing a classical instrument has
heard of it. I find it so moving that I want it to be played at my
funeral. A little morbid, yes, but maybe it will lend the comfort to
others like it did for me.
Thank you for sharing your writing with others.
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well you have now broken my record.. you have made me laugh, cry, smile, frown and get horny all in one chapter.
congratulations!!!!!!
seriously though, more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
.......................................................please!