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by padme82

schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Please don't let Severus die or I will Crucio you. Using AK would be too much, I'm not a killer.
person Jordan
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love, love this fan fiction! I usually don't read Snarry or really lonf fincs, but this one may be my favorite fic of all time. I love it! I'm a college student, so for the last few days I've been sneaking onto my computer between assignments to read. I nearly cried in the beginning with Ron. I love that you kept most aspects the same (excep for the whole Snape/Lily thing), and I love that Remus was such a big part. I cannot wait for more. Please write more! Pretty, pretty please...?
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dear goddess. I am in shock right now, I'm only one chapter in and youve already made me cry, even though i can argue with logic that of course none of this happened. In the real version everyone but snape got a happy ending, but still the way you capture their emotion is amazing. I thank you for writing this, at least from the chapter I am on, and I hope it gets better.
person Jags
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it's very good so far. I can't wait 'till you finish it.
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoot for updates and cuddles and all the angst piling up around here. You made me tear up! I so wasn't expecting that, but it's true. loved the chappie, thanks for updating! i hope your life settles down for you soon.
person QueenB
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 35 That was truly wonderful, an oasis of tenderness in the midst of terror, despair and pain. While I think Severus is wrong to belittle Harry's feelings, Harry clearly needed to gain control of himself. While I hope it will turn out for the best, I can be satisfied that it might not. It's not happy endings that matter; it's the little moments of happiness on the way that we must cherish.
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... I really don't have the words to express how much I'm adoring this story. You're fantastic! Simply fantastic! I've spent 2 days of my life reading this story and consider them well spent! I only ask that you finish... if you don't, I'll have to cry, and I get all blotchy when I cry. Seriously. It's not pretty. You have the power to avoid it! Just... keep.... writing! :D Thank you for sharing what has obviously been a labor of love... can't wait to see how it ends!
person baka
schedule September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
excellent story, can't wait for the next chapter.
person Tariray
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow - to this day i still love this fic - the way it moves me and the style of writing which seems to come so effortlessly.

Well donw, i utterly love this fic even when i have gotten over my Snarry craze.

Mind if i mention you in one of my blog posts? i think you deserve the shameless promotion.

I shall, as always keep tabs on you. You're marvellous!

T
person Tariray
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Guh - i still love this story - to pieces

my heart breaks with every chapter, i am moved by your writing skills.

really, so beautiful, i love the fragility of snape's heart - i really do. And harry, who i normally dismiss, is beautiful.

I would love to recommend you on m blog - your are so talented and this fic deserves so much acclaim. I hope you dont mind.

T