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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Very much a tear jerker, with a side of sentimental. I would love to be on a updates watch oncebittwiceshy@gmail.com
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great fic well done, I love the plot. Please add me to the update mailing list, I don't want to miss any of this.
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
faeryqueen07@gmail.com
I beg, on bended knee, if needs must, that you add me to your update list.
I started this way back when, well, you did, and after the first paragraph or so, I closed it up and put it away. I said to myself, 'well, now that's a well written one. Not much to it, yet, though, so best to put it away now and come back later.' I've been checking fairly often, but always, I set this one aside and move on because even then I knew that this would be one of the few stories that sucked you in. I could almost taste the heady flavor of prose well-loved and dished out like a feast for the literary palate.
To say that it's a 'good' story, would be doing you a disservice. To say that it is 'wonderful' discounts the pain and grief that it wrings from the soul. To say, though, that this story had shown your ability to know when and how to let the characters grow (on their own, no less!) may sound simplistic, but it's also the most true statement I can think of. Where so many others rush to get to the relationship, you have nurtured it. They have progressed at a natural rate and things aren't always smooth. Their arguments are believable, as are their separate moments of emotional revelations.
I love the interaction between Harry and Snape and though I found myself in a state of shock at Ron's untimely death, I feel that that loss has definitely helped them both set aside their near-violent animosity for one that can be tamed during the more introspective moments as well as have the fires of it fanned until it roaring once more when anger and rage are the emotions needed most.
I love Remus as well. I love his now active role in Harry's life and how he's finally taking a stand. I've always felt that he would have been great as a father figure for Harry. Of course, after just the books, I was also convinced that he and Sirius were together and felt utterly betrayed by JKR when he up and married (and impregnated) Tonks. I loathe her for killing him as well. I'll understand if you do, but I'll weep for days nonetheless.
Thank you for creating this world outside of a world where our boys can find some semblance of happiness together. I cannot wait to see where you go with this.
On that note, might I add, Draco Malfoy is splendidly cowardly as you have written him. I wait with bated breath to see him firmly trounced upon by all my favorite men (Bite him, Remus! Bite him!!).
Thank you again and please, add me to the email address.
~ FaeryQueen
I beg, on bended knee, if needs must, that you add me to your update list.
I started this way back when, well, you did, and after the first paragraph or so, I closed it up and put it away. I said to myself, 'well, now that's a well written one. Not much to it, yet, though, so best to put it away now and come back later.' I've been checking fairly often, but always, I set this one aside and move on because even then I knew that this would be one of the few stories that sucked you in. I could almost taste the heady flavor of prose well-loved and dished out like a feast for the literary palate.
To say that it's a 'good' story, would be doing you a disservice. To say that it is 'wonderful' discounts the pain and grief that it wrings from the soul. To say, though, that this story had shown your ability to know when and how to let the characters grow (on their own, no less!) may sound simplistic, but it's also the most true statement I can think of. Where so many others rush to get to the relationship, you have nurtured it. They have progressed at a natural rate and things aren't always smooth. Their arguments are believable, as are their separate moments of emotional revelations.
I love the interaction between Harry and Snape and though I found myself in a state of shock at Ron's untimely death, I feel that that loss has definitely helped them both set aside their near-violent animosity for one that can be tamed during the more introspective moments as well as have the fires of it fanned until it roaring once more when anger and rage are the emotions needed most.
I love Remus as well. I love his now active role in Harry's life and how he's finally taking a stand. I've always felt that he would have been great as a father figure for Harry. Of course, after just the books, I was also convinced that he and Sirius were together and felt utterly betrayed by JKR when he up and married (and impregnated) Tonks. I loathe her for killing him as well. I'll understand if you do, but I'll weep for days nonetheless.
Thank you for creating this world outside of a world where our boys can find some semblance of happiness together. I cannot wait to see where you go with this.
On that note, might I add, Draco Malfoy is splendidly cowardly as you have written him. I wait with bated breath to see him firmly trounced upon by all my favorite men (Bite him, Remus! Bite him!!).
Thank you again and please, add me to the email address.
~ FaeryQueen
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 14: I feel silly to write so little, but I simply loved this chapter.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chap! Waiting for more... the "Hand-holding" scences are soooo sweet!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was just great. Thier relationship is like a roller coaster, it goes up and down so many time.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is one of my most fav stories!! please post more i will give u a billion cookies:D
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I could feel the love building between these two yummy men *winks*
Please update chapter 15 soon ^_^
Jan
Please update chapter 15 soon ^_^
Jan
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so gentle and sweet, I'm really enjoying it. Good job!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. That is an amazing first chapter. You actually made me cry and that is very hard to do.