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by padme82

person QueenB
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 39 Severus
person Ataraxia
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I had to stop halfway though a chapter to review. Okay, this story is not only awesome, it is hilarious. I burst out laughing when I read the bit in chapter 10 about the apocalypse, and now I am wiping tears from my eyes from the fit of giggles I just had reading about the "little bastards" that were raisins in oatmeal.
Fabulous. I've been reading this story all day and I plan to keep it up all night!

-Ataraxia

PS, both you and your "grammar scrubber" should be proud. I actually tittered with glee when I saw properly used semi-colons!!
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm really loving this story, I have a feeling I found it awhile back and it was incomplete at the time but I'm really enjoying it. The whole corpses of grapes thing cracked me up and I remember it from before because I'm not positive but I think you kinda stole it from the movie Benny And Joon....which is like the most awesome movie ever honestly...So yeah love it...
person Ajablue
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say this was a truly lovely story. It was well thought out and flowed beautifully. I am glad that you shared it with us and that I got over my Snarry aversion in time to enjoy it.
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i think that was the best ending you could have ever written. thank you for taking all of us readers on an adventure that ended happily, with a hint of sadness, just like in real life. thank you for the journey, and i hope to read a lot more from you in the future.
schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wooohoo! *\0/* hooray you finished it and I got to be along for every step of it thanks to the lovely update notices. It was the perfect ending, and I enjoyed it thoroughly. I look forward to the ficclets. ^_^
schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
one word. EPIC!
ty for all the time and effort spent on it.
person JanisJ
schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations! So epic... and sooooo good. I bet you have a huge sense of accomplishment right now, and you should-- you did a wonderful job :) I look forward to other things you write in the future.
person Amber
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE????? I feel like a terrible human being, because I've been reading your story since it began, and never once reviewed it. I hope you will forgive me. It is the best snarry fic I've had the pleasure to read. It isn't just good as a fanfic, but as a story in itself, it is phenomenal. You do such a wonderful job of mixing Rowling's work with your own, it is hard to get enough of it. I really hope to see you update soon!
person Emailen
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You just know how to make a cliffhanger *^* PLZ i need the next chapter D: My mail: emailen.riddle@yahoo.com.
Love the fic by the way~ <3