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for Pains and Contradictions

by padme82

person Ait I Keda
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was soo wonderful... the feelings between the two are so touching... and that embrace at the end... it made me shed some tears...
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person becrenee
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! already looking forward to chpt 17:) Keep up the great work!

Becky
person Sirin Black
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic! can't wait for the next chapter :D
person Doxie
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a joy your story has been to read -- full of rich characters and compelling plot development that really exceeds what is seen in most fanfics. I am in love with both your Harry and Sev and can't wait for more updates and to see where everything leads. Thanks so much for writing this wonder piece.
person Amir
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello, i found this site off of fanfiction.net and i must say that i am impressed with this fic. I am loving the slow build-up if Severus' and Harrys' relationship. It amazes me that Harry does not know that Severus is in love with him, but our young hero has always been a bit daft, no? I really hope you continue this story and update this soon. If you would be so kind as to e-mail me when another shapter is posted i would be most grateful.

May the winds of change inspire you.
Amir
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I haven't even read the chapter, but how could someone at this point or after the description ask if this story was gen or slash? And by the way, who cares? This story is so well thought out and executed, what does it matter? :-) Anyway, going to read the next chapter now.
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
3/4 of the way through. Please Severus, do it, accept it, Merlin how long do we have to wait before one of them at least says something? :-) Loving the story, and now finishing the chapter.
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, there goes another box of tissue before its time. It was a wonderful chapter, I hope its not from too much experience of funerals, but when and if I have to have one this would be it.

The interaction between Harry, Severus, Remus, and Dumbledore leading up to the funeral was priceless. You have them down pat. I look forward to more Harry and Severus, and everyone in the next chapter!
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant! The exchanges at the Weasley house, the exchanges between Harry and Lupin, AND the exchange between Lupin and Malfoy! Not to mention the talk between Albus and Severus, and of course within the Wealey home, Harry and Hermione! I hope Harry understands it better later, well he must or he and Severus will never be.

No tissues this time. :-)
person Amarilis
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. I was having a break from studying and I thought it would be nice to read a chapter of a new story. But once I started I could not stop until I finished!!!
I really like this story! i like the way Harry's feelings are developing towards Severus and the fact that he hasn't figured out what he feels yet. I really really really want to read the next chapter so PLEASE please please update soon!! :-)

Amarilis