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by padme82

person Roni
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i hope this doesnt sound corny
but that was beautiful. you and your friend
that helped are very talented writers. this story
has become one of my favorites and i literally can
NOT wait to read more lol. please update as soon as
you can 0=] i absolutely love this story. well take
care and hope to read more soon bye love.

--roni
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That, hands down, is one of the best lemon's I have ever had the privilege to read. Dear gods... it was hot on so many levels there aren't words enough to describe it! seriously, this story is habit forming in a VERY good way. I am also desperate to know what potion Draco used on Severus, and if the effects we saw were the intended result. Now that the bonding is complete, will Severus go back to the way he was, or will it truly affect his personality the way it does now? Oooooh the suspense is going to try and assassinate me, I swear! I can't wait for the next lovely update! *adds Author and story to Recommended reading list*
person Shin
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you would explain what this potion actually did. Even if Severus rally felt like that his behavior was so un-severus-ish, so I'm really curious how much of this was from his thoughts and desires and how much was from the potion. Please update soon *puppy eyes* ^^
person SamHill
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeee!! That was so exciting! I'm so happy. But I'm also worried, too. Hopefully Snape won't come to his senses and regret this and then do horrible things to Harry just to punish himself. I'm so happy there's more!! Keep up the awesome work!!

~Fae
person toads70
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg that was sooo awesome! i thought draco had him for a minute there lol yay snape and harry :D
person anon
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. So glad to see the updates. Wonderful chapter, unexpected turn. He's not supposed to bond unknowingly to Harry. What's next?!
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story forever and I'm mad that I didn't register and review sooner >.>
This was brilliant. The passion and Harry's concern were so beautiful I couldn't stop. I do hope that the potion wasn't something major, maybe just a potion that reduces his inhibitions [I really hope it is]. The little voices are interesting as is the bonding spell [what interesting ingredients ^.~] but I can bet we'll be having lots of fun in the future regarding that particular spell.
Thank you for updating, I was dying to know what would happen and you just went all out in this chapter!!!
person Sarah
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh....you have to update this story. you must. I stayed up till 5am reading this story. told my self I was not going to bed till it was done. and you leave me hanging like that. arrg. I have to have more. please. I must for my sanity have more. I need to know what happeneds to them. what will Draco do? will Sev and Harry pull their heads out of their ass' or will they just be unhappy for good??? god *sniff* Here have some chocolate Snapes, I beg of you to update this story please. awesome job by the way.
person delorean
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Goodness! I just have to say how wonderful this is! I never review, but this story is so simply amazing that I feel obliged to, especially if it means I get to read the next chapter sooner! The scene where Snape is so turned on he just has to touch himself was probably the hottest thing I've read for a long time. I really hope things work out OK for the two, and I hope Snape stops feeling so guilty. Draco is clearly stalking him, and given how devious the bastard can be, it's pretty worrying. I do hope he doesn't succeed, because Snape and Harry clearly need each other. I'm having trouble waiting for the next chapter, I keep trying to guess what will happen next, but I doubt my imagination can come up with anything as wonderful as you have planned.
person Darkless
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaarrrrghh! A Cliffhanger! How cruel.

I havn't forgotten this story, I've just been off purusing other fics, some of which were quite long. I'm loving the development of Harry and Severus' relationship. Harry is clueless and naive, while Severus is bitter and disillusioned. Makes for a volitile combination and lots of entertainment of the voyuristic kind. LoL

Draco is really seeming like a 'stalker' with his obsession with Snape. He claims it's love, but it's too selfish to be so. More like; 'It's my toy and no one else is allowed to play with it!' He's a spoiled brat with cowardly tendencies. I hope that Harry is able to thwart whatever the ferret has planned.