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by padme82

schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely chapter! I'm just sad it wasn't longer! Haha! Still IC as ever! Love the interaction in this chapter. Can't wait for the next!
-Pan-
person anon
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch22&23 - fantastic chapters. heartbreakingly angsty w/o any whining. love the intensity of their defense of each other. surely SS will recognize H's constancy?!
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
beautiful story, can't wait for more!
person JanisJ
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just found this a day and a half ago and read it straight through (blowing off looking for a job like I really should be doing). This is EPIC! I love the story so far and want MORE! Sounds like you have it pretty mapped out, but I think it would be hilarious for Harry to toy with Snape a bit by sending him overwhelming/overpowering/incapacitating desire. I'd love to be on your update list.... my email is gryffina@yahoo.com
Keep up the great work! Hope to see more soon....
person Blood Lust 777
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-sniffs, overwhelmed-, Loved this chapter alot, can't wait for the next chapters.

person Gestalt
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the angst! I hope that it will all work out for Harry and Severus in the end....
person Darkless
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh... *shudder* the angst! *shivver*

For me, that's like giving crack to an addict, like giving candy to a diabetic...so bad, but soooooo gooood!! You've got me, hook, line and sinker!

You keep writing like this, *drool* and I'll keep reading. God, I need a breather after that.

*pant pant pant*
person polka dot
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think Harry may not have much desire to survive the final battle if he stays too miserable. Severus may be serving the dark lord afterall.
person Krysty
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
.............Oh........My...........Gosh........There are no words that can truly describe how amazing this story is. I. Absobloodylutely. LOVE. It. It was really depressing at first, and I could only read maybe one chapter at a time (I don't do well with depressing. I love it, if it ends well, but I don't do well with it. ^_^). But, as the story moved on, I slowly learned to love it soooo much more. It's awesome. It's moving. It is very well written (Thank you to the betas!). It's the kind of story that I can come home and read a chapter of after a bad day and be happy. It really pulls you in and I really love the long chapters. Thank you (and anyone who helps with it) so very, very much for sharing your *fill in awesome adj here* story with all of us and please see it through to the end. It's so very annoying when authors just stop partway through a story and don't update and come back years later saying, "Sorry! I don't like/don't remember where I was going with this so I'm just going to delete it/not finish it!"
Thank you very, very much! *hugs and brownies/cookies for you and your helpers!!! ^_^)
~Krysty^_~
person Nemoranda
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The first words out of my mouth after I finished reading this chapter was, "wow, that requires a review". Poor Harry. Poor Severus! I tell you, after the wait for 22, I have to say it was one hell of an update. I have eyeliner ALL AROUND my eyes right now. My God...really, just absolutely astounding. Your best chapter to date, I'm sure. I cannot wait for what is to come with chapter 23. Happy writing.