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AH! That's all? I mean, yes I only just started reading this, and as I was trolling through all the sludge on HPfandom looking for something decent I noticed that you had updated, but this is one of those rare gems, Severus is himself, a snarky bastard and seemingly uncaring git. His self control is legendary and you keep it that way, only letting his one person break through to him. Its as it should be, and I WANT MORE! ^.^
Oh, and by the way, I absolutely love your story, please work hard and update soon!
And another note, big props to your helpers, I wish I had some...I'm sure that they helped polish the gem before putting it on display for all to see!

zomg please update soon! Harry is dying ::pouts:: and Sev is being a prick. I love this story so pleaseeeeeeeee update as soon as you can XD

Please update again soon. They're bonded. This can't go on much longer, Severus needs to stop being so... I don't know the word. I want to call him daft but he's clearly struggling and that's not fair.

Please update again soon!

Aww, poor Harry. Well, I can't wait for you to be done with Snarry Games so that you can get back to this. I love this story. You'll have to link me to Snarry Games, though, I can see just "who" it is you're cheating on P&C with. ;) Good luck!

~Fae

How STUPID can Severus be?? I mean, I can understand why he thought that that idea would work, but there is just too much between Remus and Harry that Sev doesn't know! And I'm sorry, Sev, but you are kind of being selfish. I know that you think it's for 'Harry's benefit' and all, but really? Do you see what you are doing to him? "Oh, I need to see him, but he doesn't need to see me because I don't deserve him". Siriusly?? No. That's not right. I hope Harry does the same to Sev.....though Sev doesn't have anyone close enough to him, I suppose.....except maybe Remus....kinda.
Please Severus, just give Harry a CHANCE to show you that you are worthy of him, of love.
And of course, this chapter was beautifully written!
Thank you soo much for sharing this beautiful, emotionally-charged story with all of us!!!!
And of course, thank you betas!!!!!!!
*gives everyone cookies*

I don't understand... where is the rest of it? -chokes on a sob- I need more! You developed the plot and thier characters so well its like looking at the real book. And the pain is so real, I can feel it in my own chest when Harry is hurting, not so much Severus, but maybe thats because I'm more like the boy-hero (except not a boy or a hero!) and it all seems so very real. Please update soon! I don't know what I would do with out more!

Oh! *sniffles* Really moving chapter, that was. I don't know who i'm feeling more for.

Can't wait for the next.

I hope Remus doesn't get Harry's anger for his part, otherwise harry will lose a necessary friend. This story is so angsty (love that).

Jeez, Snow, you make me so glad I'm practically incapable of crying. That was just devastating! Is there an end in sight for Harry's (and Severus') suffering?

Well written, though that's hardly a surprise, given it's you! Thank you for the update!!

~Fae

Ok that was a very VERY bad idea on Severus' part. How much longer is he going to let this continue? Does Harry have to try slitting his wrists before he finally sees sense? God the man is hopeless. And I wonder How Harry will feel towards Remus for allowing him to do it to him. I don't see that ending well either. Snape, you truly are an idiot, I hope you get over yourself before it's too late for both of you.