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for Pains and Contradictions

by padme82

schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! You're back! I have been waiting and waiting for you to update this story again and you did not disappoint! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please don't leave us waiting for so long again!
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great to see this fic. updated!
You never fail to impress me with each new chapter. I always wonder how you'll manage to top the previous chapter, but you always do!
Really enjoyed the chapter and the interaction between the characters.

Cheers, and good luck with the next chapter!
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am going to beat Severus Snape within an inch of his life, take his wand, tie him to the bed, and give him to Harry as a present. *growls* That stupid, IDIOT! Making my Harry beg, ooooh I'm gonna beat him good.


*Glomp tackles author* On the other hand, I'm just so glad to see you come back to this!!! I've missed you terribly!! I will go read what has kept you from us for so long, but I really hope there's another chapter to this really soon because I've MISSED it damnit!
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, that was a wonderfully powerful chapter -you certainly came back with a bang.

Like Remus, my heart is aching. *sniff*
person Iralima
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I've been checking 3-4 times a week for an update =) Such a relief to know you'll be continuing the story. And a great update it was too, I really do hope Severus doesn't die though. It was just too painful reading about Harry begging to think that it may have been for nothing... Looking forward to the rest of it!
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Severus, you bastard! I hope you come back alive. If you die, I hope Ron kills you in the afterlife then brings you back to life, then sends you back to Harry so he can kill you himself. Harry's passionnate speech worked partly since they kissed but it was not enough to make him stay. As Remus said, damn you, Severus.

The dream was kind of sad. Ron is waiting for Harry, like he knows something. Severus, Harry is dying because of your staying away, damn it!

Fate intervened once with the potion, why don't they do it again? Severus needs a good kick in the butt!
person SamHill
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I seriously cannot believe that you chose to let that end there. I could *die* for that. I'm fairly certain you won't let Snape die. *envisions doing Very Cruel Things to Snow, should Snape die* I've got my own hopes and fears (and desperate wants) for the next chapter, but I'll hold my tongue.

So good to have you back. I love this story! Now I shall go bookmark your Snarry Games story to be read very, very soon!! Congrats on getting it done! :D

~Fae

P.S. I heart you. This is a wonderfully written story.
person Cassandra
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! LOVE IT like i do every chapter of this story along with ur Snarry games piece hehe. I LOVE IT, I LOVE THIS STORY! I cant wait for the next chapter. It was AWESOME Snow!
person purpleredswirls
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy the emotional depth that each character feels so they are no longer stereotypical fan fiction characters that are not in control by the author. Many times the characters are not given enough depth and just appear as names doing actions and going through a plot. CANT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!...no pressure cause as a previous fan fic author I know how that feels...lol
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to update this again? I really really like this story and have been waiting to read more. Please?