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by padme82

schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one my most favorite stories of all time. This is the first one, in many months, that has made me cry. I love it. Thank you so much for this wonderful story.
person Frostie Soul
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually a writer here under the pen name FrostieSoul, but I'm just not logged in.
I have been following this fiction closely. I mean, like, pining over it when it hasn't been updated.
You have managed to get me completely infatuated with this pairing in the way you have given both Harry and Snape a life beyond that which is portrayed in the books. You've given them actual emotion, other than "oh, it's my duty to do-, oh god I think he just DIED!"

And the fact that you have given a view into a Snape that no one would believe is amazing. He is sad, angry, happy. he smiles for crying out loud. It's tangeable. PLease, update soon. I'm pining again. :,{
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally!! I'm so happy that they are back together and can't wait to see how Severus and Harry react to each other now. How will admitting being in love with Harry change Severus now that they are together?
person ametomoe
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
???????????????????????????????? OMG YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE ME HERE HANGING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M LIKE CRYING RIGHT NOW AS I'M READING YOUR STORY OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON OR I WILL GO INSANE!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR WRITING IS SO BEAUTIFUL GAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!OMG I WANT HARRY TO BE ALL RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh... *sniffles*

Once more, a really beautiful portrayal of Severus' utter devastation there, with very real depictions of both his physical and mental reactions. *more sniffling*

And now I shall drag out my pom poms and do a little cheer because Harry is finally where he should have been for several chapters -in Severus' bed.

Wonderful update, thank you!
person QueenB
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 30 Draco being missing is worrisome. He probably went off with those Death Eaters. I hope the next time Harry sees him, he kicks his butt.

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schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEAHHH!!!!! You go girl, finally our boys got it right!!! Awesome!!! I have been reading this story faithfully and it is worth it!! Great job, can't wait to see what is next!!
person Iralima
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You updated!!! *happy dance* I'm so glad they're finally back together. It really was about time Severus saw sense, though I wish it had taken something a little less dramatic to make it happen. Can't wait for the next chapter =) please make it a happy once?
person ametomoe
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so happy they are back together. thank you for not leaving me hanging for a long time lol.
I realize i discovered this story about 30 chapters late, but now that I am reading it, I am riveted. This is the first Snarry i've ever read and enjoyed. I've always been a drarry fan and found snarry kind of creepy, but your writing helped me understand the characters and the beauty of love between two people even when one is not necessarily beautiful. I'm definitely a snarry shipper now.
please update soon!
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was late to work today because I stayed to read this before leaving. >_<' ... but it was soooo worth it! Hooray for Severus FINALLY getting his head out of his ass! ... at least a bit. Thank the gods, I was beginnning to think the man was absolutely hopeless!

I love you I love you I love you, THANK YOU for the update!