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by Vegico

person pfeil
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kinky!Hermione FTW =)
person jon snider
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story
person kjp
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the whole "you are mine tonks" seemed kinda cliched but other then that great update soon

KJP
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
come on, there's been hundreds of stories like these, it's always harry, he always becomes a sex god, and he gets to fuck everyone, every male is worse than him, ron suddenly becomes a bastard,....
not very original anymore
person lycus
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please add Hermione, the Patil twins, Daphne Greengrass, and Su Li or Luna to the mix. This story is awesome
person lycus
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
But PLEASE no Ginny
person Dragen
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story mate, I like how the story is going and that Harry wanted to control the women around him, I hope you keep up the great work and update soon. I like Harry is going to find a way to being his mum back. PLEASE email me when you update next, as I would like to see what happens next. Would you read my story, Harry Potter and the Slaves
person Codyesh2
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If I had to suggest any pairings they would be as followed
1)Lily Potter
2)Ginny Weasley
3)Tonks
4)Narcissa
5)Hermione
6)Daphne GreenGrass/Traci Davis or Pansy Parkinson
person Uthra
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*lol*

Good beginning of a story.
Even better ending of a chapter.

Please keep it cumming...
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for more lily