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by Vegico

person Elphaba
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well that's interesting
person Mellow03
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, good story, can ya include dirty blow job or anal-blow job after in anal and sucking cum and rimming from anal. Can be little dirty or anything, well, just dirty in anal, but nothing on butt, but little or nothing. But you decide. Would be kinky to have dirty blow job, that have minor scat, not thick scat, but minor or if bigger if you want. Good stuff on the blood in sex. I have a story about Ginny/Hermione/Ron/Harry as foursome as a story or one shot story, but that is dirty. Well, you can check it out at my profile as my author name is 'Mellow03'. Ya haven't write the another story in this website in a while.
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
glad to see you're back to writing.
I look forward to more, both of this, and hopefully, stories beyond this one.
person Dragen
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A bit short, you could have added it to the last chapter... I hope to see Lily soon and Harry Doming over Tonks.
person Dragen
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot chapter mate, PLEASE update soon, as I would like to see what you have planned next.
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool story I can't wait for Lily to come back.
A Tonks/Andromeda/Harry threesome would be cool and something I've never seen before.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you are continuing this story this is a great read
person vannilla
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
who caught them???!!!
person NarutosBrat
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seventeen credits, that's like five classes and two labs. I do not envy you my friend. This story is great by the way. I wonder who that next girl is. Could it be his first lovely, Miss Tonks Lupin, or could it possibly be a certain sexy redhead? The anticipation is electrifying.