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I like it. Update soon?

Hey you asked if anyone had any ideas for upcoming chapters,
Having lily come back and be with harry would be good
And I really don't like ron as a character or with hermione

Anyway these are my opinions
Good job otherwise and look forward to future chapters

Tags indicating you're working your way to slash and femdom would have been nice. Neither of them are things I'm terribly fond of, and had I known what was coming I'd have skipped reading. Instead, surprise slash. Do not want.

Hi, good story. I want to be sure you put "puckered hole", so that means Harry went to have sex in Hermione's Butt. But two cum together and the juice mixed together at once. So, not sure what ya mean in story?? I read at first and thought two cock in vagina. Anyway, don't have to go to author page, there is nothing. But can go to Forums and in Challenge story, you can see my author name 'Mellow03'. For foursomes story. Harry/Hermione/Ron/Ginny. If write about it, hope can pick dirty story. If there is going to be anal sex, and afterward to suck cock or lick from anal or fingering and sucking it. Can ya write exactly the same as what they do as the readers to know exactly?? Example for rimming, if only rimming but no explain as how it taste or anything, they might not care that it is dirty or clean or no explain about other person that is getting rimmed is clean or not.

Good work

good work

I realy hope you have Hermione stay with Harry (R/Hr just dosent make sence and JKR obviously did it to piss off the H/Hr fans

Well that was interesting!

holy hell that was good!

Well that's hot and not good! LOL