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for At the Shore of The Heart

by neelix

person KellyJCR
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, glad your back. I am deffinatly interested in your story. this one seems very different from those that you usually write. I've don't know how you are going to work this out. They are both in seperate relationships and Severus is going to be morning when his wife dies (unless she gets magically saved). Can't wait for more. Well done!!
person noeby
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, hell, Neelix! What are you thinking! LOL This will be a long one. SS married with a woman he loves (although dying). HG involved. I've got my cuppa. Just waiting on the updates.

Noe
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! What a gut-wrenching way to start off your story. Hermione is a healer in the most emotionally draining ward (Hospice) and she has to console and comfort the most disagreeable man on the planet (Severus Snape). Can her life get any more complicated than that?

I can't wait to see what direction you're going to take with this. Looking forward to your next update!
MHS