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neelix,
I'm grieving at the moment. There is no pattern to it, and each person has their way. While you could have written chapters on snape's grieving, it wouldnt necessarily add to the story. This is 5 months later. I think you did the right thing. We know how much loss he felt. And how he treated hermione was very in character. N

Wow neelix that was something else. I hope Severus tries and makes it up to Hermione. And no you didn't gloss over Severus's grief. We all grieve in different ways.

Good job, getting through the grieving as you did. I don't mean to trivialize it, and I know that you don't, either, but heavens, if you just wrote about grieving it wouldn't be a story appropriate for the present audience, would it?

Lovely take on the pairing - I'm really enjoying it.

Cheers

CB

You are killing me. I think you have captured Sevs grief perfectly. I find it interesting that he has slipped back into his old brooding self so easily. He seemed quite differnt almost changed when he was with his wife. Hermione however is seeming to loose her gryffindor bravery. She has always been one to meet her problems head on and this Edward individual doesn't seem to be good for her. Great update, I can't get enough of your story. Well done!!

Well done. Hermione leaving...omg, ouch. Thanks for the update.

Hi neelix,
sorry,but it has been a long time since I last reviewed one of your stories.RL is kicking in and my children both have two whole months of vacation and we have to battle for the pc.Besides I got lost on GE for a while.Today my oldest daughter left for England and she asked me what she could bring me from her trip;I asked her to go,find Alan Rickman,stunn him and bring him home,but I guess that she will have other iteresting things to do. That reminded me of your bio and I needed to check out your newest stories.And I wasn't disapponted.This story is soooooo good but also very sad.I think I will be back again tommorow to check if tere is a new chapter.(((H))) Sureves Epans

Oh my, so sad. *sniffs* Beautifully done. Thanks.

Liked your author's note; especially liked how the lines you used were Rickman's from S&S.

I'm enjoying this story, despite the currently sad (yet all too common, here in the Muggle world) storyline.

Cheers

CB

I like it. Please update soon.

I absolutely love this story. I can't wait to see more.