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for At the Shore of The Heart

by neelix

schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person noeby
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh you meanie, stopping there.

my dad died today. this cheered me up. Thanks. N
person neelix
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Noeby

Sorry to hear your sad news - sent you a PM on 394.

nee x
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story, and you were right it took several tissues to get through the last chapter. I am hoping for them to get together, but of course we, and they, will have to get through this painful time. If you can shorten that time it would save me on the cost of tissues. :-) Really, your talent for writing is extarordinary and I look forward to more!
person CB13
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew Edward was a shallow jackass from the moment I met him.

Ok, ok, that's bitter, and wrong, and I know he's a "red shirt" - your screen name indicates you know what I mean here - but still, really, his poisonous little letter to Our Heroine left me seething.

Good work!!!

CB
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. update soon.

Foofie
person KellyJCR
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well it seems Edward is not very understanding. Apparently buisness is buisness with him. If he knew Hermione at all he would know that she wears her heart on her sleave and eventually a patient would reach her on an emotional level. I would dare day she is well ride of his company. Severus is still in a bad place I'm know loosing someone that close is difficult to move on from. It takes time and a few months is just not long enough. I am sure he will come around at some point (at least that is what I hope). Til next time well done.
person noeby
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
too short, neelix!!! LOL

Seriously, though, what a piece of work Edward is! How rude. Maybe it's good that he's gone now and she sees what he's like.

cant wait for more.
N
person KellyJCR
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Every time I stop you have me tearing up again. Great chapter it really let us in on how Sev is getting on. It was also nice to see that Minerva still has an intrest even if he isn't responding. It lets him know that he isn't alone although Sev almost seems to revel insuffering in exile. Beautiful and sad at the same time. Well done!
person noeby
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah, nice. Sad but good. Thank you for writing more!