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for At the Shore of The Heart

by neelix

person Muffy
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My goodness that was intense. Well done. Thanks for the updates!
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story..i hope you post more soon,,cant wait to read more..i think there is more to lucy then severious thought, maybe a little magical. and boy are they in trouble,,they didnt use protection...oops..hehe...cant wait to read more. very well written.good job.
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lemons good!!!!!!!!!!!

The end scares me a little, but I know it is what has to happen. They will work through this, and so will we.

Amazing and always good writing!
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Augh! Sometimes Severus can be such an idiot! How could he just leave like that? Yes I realize that he is still devastated over the loss of his wife, but did he really need to add to the confusion of the situation by sleeping with Hermione and then running off like a kid caught out after curfew?

I know...she sort of asked for it (I
person Tenar10r
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very much on track :)
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. At first I was devestated that Severus was so hung up on another woman, but now I see thats how it had to be! lol, Love your work :) keep it up!
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, just finished reading your latest update, it has me on the edge of my seat! I cant believe the cliff hangers your keep leaving your loyal readers lol, i'm new to the site but youf fanfics are ace! Cnt wait until its finished, i knew you wouldnt be so cruel to leave Herione on her own while Severus dated. Keep up the great and inspiring writing!
person KellyJCR
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused why could he not shag Ines and then in the next breath he is kissing Hermione. Is it because he didn't feel comfortabe with Ines or, is it the fact that maybe becasue Lucy liked Hermione it was Sevs way of thinking she was a better choice. This story has my heart going to highs and lows so rapidly that it may cause bodily harm.. Can't wait for the next installmant I am totally stunned at the latest turn of events. Well done!!!
person Carine
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi neelix,
this chapter was just so sensible,I think it was a good idea to have kept the lemons back.
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh...Im glad he didnt go in with Ines LOL I nearly stopped reading the story because of her. Dont ask me why, I dont know...I get weird about Snape with OCs.....Im an odd bird at times. Anyhoo....very heart wrenching, it will take some convincing for Hermione to beleive his feelings for her are real and not just him being on the "rebound" so to speak. Should be a rough road ahead for them


Happy Writing!
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