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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Character development is excellent, and although AU, the story is certainly interesting! More, please?
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Words cannot explain how I feel about your story but I will try. The both of you have written something quite unique and fasinating and compelling. I love the letter format between Severus and Hermione. There is something so elegant, intimate and special in writing letters between two people and in this case these two people. It is an elegant art form that has been lost (to some degree) in favor of texting on a phone or a brief email between friends. Both of your characters have expressed their thoughts and feelings in written form which on a whole is very personal and hard to hid behind once the letters are written and sent, because the written word is there until the receiver disposes of it, which in the case of these two, I don't think is going to happen.. I have enjoyed each and every chapter and look forward to the next chapter. Excellent job,,,brava!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh no! I am fretful. I had assumed now the whole story was written and being posted. Too many wips never make it.
But, on the chapter, what a delicious tale and just so deftly executed. Simon is pitch perfect. And hermione delightful. The plot unravelling gently is intruiging. I was wondering what sort of a plot would be underlayed on the format -- being familiar with the original book in question. You guys write so brilliantly together. Awesome.
But, on the chapter, what a delicious tale and just so deftly executed. Simon is pitch perfect. And hermione delightful. The plot unravelling gently is intruiging. I was wondering what sort of a plot would be underlayed on the format -- being familiar with the original book in question. You guys write so brilliantly together. Awesome.
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. I hope that they do meet soon.
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!
Now, I demand it!
please?
Now, I demand it!
please?
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting steamy - loving it!
I also love Simon's relationship wit Yorick - it has me laughing out loud!
Thanks!
I also love Simon's relationship wit Yorick - it has me laughing out loud!
Thanks!
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story very much,I look forward to reading another chapter.
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Part 8 - Yum. I love it. The letters are such a great way to have them fall in love. How Hermione described her fantasy was very nice.
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fly me to the moon
Let me sing among those stars
Let me see what spring is like
On jupiter and mars
In other words, hold my hand
In other words, baby kiss me
Fill my heart with song
Let me sing for ever more
You are all I long for
All I worship and adore
In other words, please be true
In other words, I love you
Let me sing among those stars
Let me see what spring is like
On jupiter and mars
In other words, hold my hand
In other words, baby kiss me
Fill my heart with song
Let me sing for ever more
You are all I long for
All I worship and adore
In other words, please be true
In other words, I love you