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for Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road

by devsgma

person cranky monday reviewer
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahem, ladies.

Your update is noticeably absent.

Thought you should know.
person cranky monday reviewer
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear Ladies,

Your update is spectacularly written, although incomplete.

The last several paragraphs seemed to have been inadvertently left off.

Thought you should know so you could rectify it asap.

:::hugs:::

CMR
person vic
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww bless, poor simon. Still looking forward to some smut and if u say ur not intentionally teasing me i will believe you xx
person sevsgirl
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are two BRILLIANT writers!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
person snapeaddiction
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh, I think I know where this is going - that manipulative rotten bastard!
person neelix
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to slap him.....! Blimey, he makes this as hard as pulling teeth, just because he wont drop his guard and allow her in, and because he wants to hang on to LILY - who is DEAD!

*sigh* I know it's only a story, but honestly......


lol... thanks for this juicy update - now, keep typing...that's the way, tap tap tap.....
person VoraciousReader
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I can see ol'DD manipulating his dreams to maintain the guilt that brought him such a useful tool. Couldn't have Sev recovering emotionally too early to be useful, could he? I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
person noeby
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor simon. so if no one can sleep with him it does somewhat limit the relationship angle, doesnt it? at the moment anyway. the awkwardness was palpable in this chapter. nice.
person neelix
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn Mrs Carmichael!!!!! Severus should have hexed her into next week!

God I love this story so much.. very sexy..... looking forward to the next installment!
person vic
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
But you said you werent teasing!!!!!!!!!!