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Hi, I am reading this story and wanted to let you know that I am enjoying it. 

I absolutely loved this story! i have been reading it while at Burning Man, and enduring the glares of the hippies as I seek out power for charging and wifi in order to feast on this tale. The characters are beautifully on point; I absolutely love Severus and his falcon and any romance that happens through witty correspondence is always a treat. I thank you so much for the fun ride - so very, very enjoyable. I look forward to discovering more of your work. Brilliant!

Thanks for such an enjoyable story! I like how their relationship develops, depicted with the series of letter. The plot-twist of a manipulative Dumbledore has been dosing Severus is very nice twist too!

I feel the conflicts (vs Dumbledore, vs Malfoy, etc.) in the story are deliberately downplayed: perhaps to focus on HG/SS relationship?!

I just realized that the breaks are little owls in flight! That is just too freaking cute!!! I love it!!! Loving the story too by the way, I just had to stop and acknowledge the owls for a moment before continuing on with reading! :D
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well... I must say I am a bit dissapointed by this Dumbledore-thing. Somehow it doesn't feel right that he is so outright evil. Your story so far was very balanced and subtle when it came to the characters and their light and dark sides. Of course, this is your fiction and you can do whatever you want ;-) I just wanted to name my uneasiness about this turn of the plot...

I am absolutely enchanted by your story!!!! It is simply perfect - the words, the style, the characters, the plot. I love it, love it, love it!!!! have to go on reading...;-)

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! I can't tell you how hard it was to stop reading in order to sleep or go to work! I will look forward to your future writing! Keep at it your great.

I couldn't let the moment pass without informing the both of you that I think this was such an utterly beautiful story. I loved it. The plot was excellent, I loved the hints at Dumbledore's interference and the final reveal of the love curse put on Severus. I enjoyed seeing the differences (and similarities) in Severus' and Hermione's thoughts, the switching POV made the story even more enjoyable. I also got a kick out of the letters at the beginning of the story. I thought it was quite clever that the story ended with the mad rush caused by yet another of Severus' letters. It was a nice reflection of the initial letter than began their correspondence and eventual (beautiful, lovely, sweet) relationship. Top-notch, outstandingly written story!

Tiny edit in a overall fantastic fic [chapt 7]: "Do not loose yourself in the daydreams, Hermione." "Loose" should probably be "lose".


::continues reading::

Chapt 19: Oh man, the book she isn't writing is going to come back to bite her, isn't it? I wonder if 'Simon' will read her letter to Harry or find out another way. You've both already established with the bath scene (and, okay, almost every scene) that he's just a teensy bit paranoid and likely to jump to conclusions. Man... I hope there's a scene with Harry or Ron. I'd like to know what happened to Ron, saying that she was fridged seems unfinished. Was there more story behind that?

::reads onward:: Love this fic