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for Coloured Grey

by IncessantDarkness29

person Cupid's lover
schedule August 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Next chappy please:)
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco!!! Soooo need chapter 5!!!
person Rosei
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SICK!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!

MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks!
R
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I soooo need chapter 4!
person Tree
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Your writing style is interesting to my brain. I hope you continue this story.
person Dezra
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very good. I don't understand why the boys don't ask for help outside of Grimmauld. Lupid stopped coming by it seems, what about Ron's family? Snape? Isn't there someone out there that could help heal Malfoy?
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:) Well I'm glad my reviews got me a new chapter. lol But seriously, I'm glad you continued this. Yes, I definitely saw the more "storylike" quality of this chapter, and I felt a bit of a lost of imagery after the first section of this chapter (excepting the end bit) with all of the antagonistic dialogue, but you definitely have me intrigued. My questions really still stay the same, and even are being accumulated, so I look forward to the next chapter and why the Order isn't working together with Harry...assuming that they are alive. Now that I think of it, I'm wondering about what kind of character dynamic you'll be approaching if this relationship turns at all sexual. You usually seem to prefer a confidant bottom, Draco, and a rather aggressive top, Harry. Last thing, Do you intend to continue Dreamscape? Great job with this chapter.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3!!!
person char_marcus
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is GOOD start to what could be a great story i love a vulnerable malfoy *sigh* keep it up and please update soon
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. This sort of style is very raw, and I'm interested in where you'll take this. Is Hermione alive and well? Are there deeper explanations as to why Ron is being a prick? Nice job so far. :)