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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: Color of Night...
WOW i love this one shot.... great job!!!!1
WOW i love this one shot.... great job!!!!1
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: Missing YOu
Great job hon! Especially for your first run out! I was touched by the emotion, longing and need you conveyed! Way to go!
Happy Writing!
SG
Great job hon! Especially for your first run out! I was touched by the emotion, longing and need you conveyed! Way to go!
Happy Writing!
SG
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
If that was your first go at fanfiction, I can't wait to read what you come up with after more practice.
I enjoyed reading your story because it was well edited, competently written and flowed wonderfully.
Please keep writing.
If that was your first go at fanfiction, I can't wait to read what you come up with after more practice.
I enjoyed reading your story because it was well edited, competently written and flowed wonderfully.
Please keep writing.
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Missing You:
That was a sweet and sad fic. It fit the mood of the song and what Severus must have been telling himself all those year to get by. Very nice. Please keep writing.
That was a sweet and sad fic. It fit the mood of the song and what Severus must have been telling himself all those year to get by. Very nice. Please keep writing.
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cliobella: Missing You
Wow! That was an excellent first time fic. The longing, the waiting across the distance and the years coupled with the fact that their feelings for each other never waivered...it makes you believe that true love really can stand the test of time.
Very well written!
MHS
Wow! That was an excellent first time fic. The longing, the waiting across the distance and the years coupled with the fact that their feelings for each other never waivered...it makes you believe that true love really can stand the test of time.
Very well written!
MHS
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sidneysnape: What Hurts the Most
What a gut-wrenching story. The pain of losing newfound love resonated throughout your entire story. Very moving.
Even though it was very sad, I enjoyed it.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
MHS
What a gut-wrenching story. The pain of losing newfound love resonated throughout your entire story. Very moving.
Even though it was very sad, I enjoyed it.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
MHS
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: Whatever It Takes
first i have to say what a great idea i love the lucius/hermione challenge and this one is going to be just as awesome.... Great one shot... i liked how you had it from both of their perspectives then both of them together.. very good
first i have to say what a great idea i love the lucius/hermione challenge and this one is going to be just as awesome.... Great one shot... i liked how you had it from both of their perspectives then both of them together.. very good
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: Immortality
great one shot.... loved the use of the pheonix tears... and harry with luna, i do love it when authors stray form the norm, and this is fabulous!!!!
great one shot.... loved the use of the pheonix tears... and harry with luna, i do love it when authors stray form the norm, and this is fabulous!!!!
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad, especially given that he was going to propose to her. It was well written.
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent set of one-shots! Wonderful choice of songs. Will have to dust off my mp3 player and see if anything inspires me. Thanks so much for writing!