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I loved your story so far. It's so HOTT!!!!! But is there any more???? It was just starting to get good. ~Frank~

Interesting way to end this last chapter now I want to know what happens next. Please update soon... Hopefully before the end of next weekend so I got something to end the weekend with...

I love your story though to be honest I think that Hermione would have talked to Harry about how she was feeling and her needs before she did something intentionally that he had told her not to do keep up the good work and plz don't punish Hermione to hard

Poor Mione! Course it shall be interesting to see what she has to say!

awesome chapter. will you make it so that the dream was real. It would be interesting to see Haryy and Hermione use Hermione and her father to their whims

Not a bad start mate, I like the talk between Harry and Hermione at the start where she told Harry that she wanted to be a slave, to be controlled and force her to do thing she wouldn't normally do, but only if that person loved her. I hope you don't mind but I might use some of your ideas for my story Harry Potter and the Slaves, as Hermione in my story wants to be submitted by Harry, and I need ideas.

Oh another great chapter, I would like it if you could email me, as I would like to talk to you more about your story, as I would like some help for my story, as I like what I'm, reading so far and I would your advise for on this subject of Dom/Sub. In my story Harry and Hermione (there will be a few others) are in a willing Dom/Sub relationship, where Harry will treat them fairly and caring, but with the other slaves he won't be. So I need help with the willing Dom/Sub part of the relationship for Harry and Hermione. Some of your ideas I'm planing to use soon, but I would like help to make sure I'm doing things write... so could you email me ASAP - ranger_daregn@hotmail.co.uk

I like how Harry has been treat Hermione so far and I can't wait to see what happens next, and see how people well react to the relationship.

Oh I'm loving this story and how you have writen this story, it has helped me a lot and some of the ideas for my story, but I would like to talk to you more about this over MSN if you got it... I like the idea of going Darker... it happens in real life and so why not in the your story too. I like the part with Hermione/Luna very nicely done mate. I like Harry's dream... keep up the great work and update soon.

Hope to talk to you soon.

Dragen.

I really like what is going on here, Luna on the chase lounge playing with herself came as a very nice surprise. Keep up the good work.

I am very interested in this story. The plotline is really good. You have a number of spelling errors and grammatical errors, but all can be easily fixed if that is your desire. The errors in punctuation do affect the flow of the story and make reading it a bit difficult, but after a few chapters, it gets easier to overlook those errors, though that is not to say that they really shouldn't be fixed. I do enjoy this story, and it has given me a different way of looking at things in regards to het HP stories.
<3 Yuki