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by AimeeBass

person kazfeist
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very good first chapter. You have captured perfectly what I see as Hermione's basic insecurity about herself in any area outside academics. I think it's a fairly universal feeling among girls with a different kind of beauty. And, the opposite feeling occurs in girls who are physically attractive. They feel they cannot sustain a relationship once their looks begin to fade. Can't wait to see what's next. :D
person Kristen
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it! please update soon.
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow!
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. just wow. it was intense and sad and vulnerable.

I always love how Lavender is the dirty mistress. It never ceases to amuse me.

You definitely have me in for the long haul. I'm truely interested to see how this will play out. How Draco comes into the equation should be interested.

I wasn't too thrilled with the ending. I would have expected her to leave, or make him leave. But I know that deep down if I were in her shoes, I would have done the same thing. I would have lain with him, needed the comfort even if it had been coming from his arms, so even though I wasn't thrilled about it, I understood it.

I think I'm not thrilled because I know I would have done the same, and that makes me feel pathetic. and I don't think Hermione should be pathetic. But I know she'll gain her footing again. I was proud of the hitting though. Not that I condone violence. But yes. He deserved it ahhaha.

Eagerly awaiting your next installment.