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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i likeis story i hope that mia makes ro pay
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're right. It was a fairly short chapter. BUT...it was a good one. I can't wait for more!
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chap... i can not believe that she slept with ron but of course she would she was hurting... wow so what was draco doing in her home and why did he come at that moment???? hmmm and i hope ron gets what he deserves in the end!!!!
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting chap! i don't know about aspirin+alcohol but it must not be very very good lol it's a good chap though it's depressed ...but i like it...wanna read more!
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far,but make the chapters a little longer.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, there is so much emotion in your chapters. It's entrancing.
I'm really curious as to why Draco was in her house. And why there was a flash of green. Does't green mean Avada Kedavra? anyways, I can't wait to be entranced more by your chapters.
I'm really curious as to why Draco was in her house. And why there was a flash of green. Does't green mean Avada Kedavra? anyways, I can't wait to be entranced more by your chapters.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this. What she was feeling in the first chapter was described perfectly. I've felt it before myself, but I won't go into too much detail other than to say that you captured the emotion and the physical reaction perfectly. Of course I didn't go for suicide but I definitely can relate to the feelings of utter despair and shock. I can't wait for more and I hope you update again soon!
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW what a great chap.... I can not wait to read how draco falls into this... great job
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is good shit:D really good writing, the way you describe hermiones breakdown is just fantastic!! keep up the great work<3<3
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great start. very dramatic. keep it coming