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Great fic! Can't wait to read more!!!

This is practically your first fanfic? Wow, you write like a pro. And not just over the technical stuff like grammar, but the plot is captivating.

I'm just starting this story and I'm loving it! I can't wait until the next update!

okay just now reading this stoy--and i love it!!! but i have to say.....i cant believe that you just ended that chapter like that! i do hope that you have another chapter coming and soon!!! i do have to say though that i love long stories and i will willingly wait for chapters, bur i do like them updated regularly. :) well talk about a bombshell. i cant wait to see draco reaction! :) and i totally agree with you hermione needs time besides they both need the time to grow in many ways. do update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Oh. Please do continue!!!

That was an evil cliffie you posted last!!

Can't wait for more!

HI!! I just read the 1st 6 chapters of your story, and it is BRILLIANT!!! I like it a lot and cannot wait to read more...
soo many thing to find out the truth about?? ooh things are getting juicy!

Oooh. Great update! I can't wait for more!

Sooo... I really like your story, although I personally don't see Hermione as somebody who would try to commit suicide because her husband cheated on her. I think she's too strong to let some bastard ruin her life like that. I think that there must be more behind that whole thing, maybe another, additional reason why she would be so desperate? But it is your story, so it's definitly your decision.

Oh, and then there is one thing I realised: You wrote Fluer Delacour, but it's Fleur. I wasn't sure if it was simply a typos, obviously, but since you wrote it twice, I wanted to point it out.

Please continue...

shit, i think i fell down after that

OMG i am utterly speechless... you threw me for a loop there.... and I LOVE IT!!!!! of course she can not be broken when her and draco start a relationship i do not think that would work out... but in this chap we saw mix of emotions for her that he would have never shown before which is starting his realization process.... wow why did blaise keep this secret but now it explains a lot and when draco saw something deeper between them i was thinking that he thought blaise loved her which is probably what he did think.... hmm i wonder how she will react when she finds out.... also i noticed that little part about fleur that should prove to be interesting also ron very true what made him sooo horrible i mean really the scene when he took her chair that was before he had affairs or after? ok and why was it that angelina was the only one outraged i mean ginny made a face but that was it.. also what is going on with her friends they seem to treat hermione as a doormat is there something more there? wow what a great chap i mean really there are so many questions that i am excited about learning the answer to that i do not even know where to begin... ohhhh what was blaise doing in america i mean really why did he have to do it alone bc if it was just some idiot contacting him threw the mark he would have told draco there has to be more to it then that...was it dolohov? ok i just want to say that you have done a great job at writing a broken hermione very believable but you have also given her a little spark to show us what she will be like when she gets her self grounded again... also i just love this type of blaise very caring and all that.... and draco is written very well all pissed off bc his best friend is upset then pissed off at his best friend very classic draco and well written... ok seriously i am not sure if i can wait as long for an update please update soon i am sooo excited to read dracos reaction....