rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Seeing as you deleted my previous review, I supposed you considered it flaming. I'll try to give you constructive criticism this time.
Harry proposing to Hermione one moment, when he was hesitant of her even loving him the previous one, makes no sense.
I wont comment the rest of the story as I didnt like it and didnt read it to a hundred percent.
This does not mean the story sucks, but I didn't like it.

O.O He's so quick!! Ghaa~!! Harry's so cute! Wowwwwwwwwwwww

Your writing is great. I look forward to reading more by you.