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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know Ive read this one before but it was not completed I like it and hope to read more thanks
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I think that Hermione will definately choose Barty over any of the others. I look forward to reading more.
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far. I wasn't going to read it because I could not get past the Barty from the books, but you did explain it away well. I like that you added that he was part of the original marauders. Anyway well done and I am looking forward to an update.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredible story. I look forward to reading more. I am glad that you have chosen this couple. I hope that Barty does agree to marry Hermione.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the beginning...having her weigh up her options and getting others' opinions...more soon please xxxx
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An interesting first chapter. You did a good job tweaking the cannon characters to fit into your story, I look forward to read more!