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schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally, a kiss:-)) They are not rushing things are they? Just kidding, since it is an arranged marriage they probably should take more time than most to get to know eachother, they have to get over a "I don't want to" period most couples dont have to.
Again a very nice chapter, I look forward to read more!!
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very romantic. I am glad that Hermione initiated the kiss. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great updates, I really like your story!
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I am glad that Sara-Jane's mother is finally accepting that her daughter has to marry Sirius. I look forward to reading the next one.
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more. I look forward to seeing who Severus ends up with or if he will be exiled. I am glad that Sirius has gotten a great young lady to marry.
person KellyJCR
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this. The showdown between Snape, Hermione , Black and Delaney was classic. Can't wait for more. Well Done!
person Sampdoria
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. I like your story, it is good to read something humourous, romantic and easygoing, not to mention that you are kind enough to let Sirius being alive:-))
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more to see how Severus and Rupert take the news that she has chosen Barty.
person KellyJCR
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so pleased to see a second update so soon. I love the way you write dialogue it gives the existing relationships a real depth. The fact that you turned Blaise into a girl to avoid the dark mark was very creative. Also the fact that Ron is in a relationship with her is even better. Great job can't wait for more.