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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is seriously really good. I hope you continue it.
the plot is super suspenseful.
the plot is super suspenseful.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more. This is incredible so far.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I can't wait for more. This has got me completely enthralled. My head is spinning with allthe possibilites. Well done!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Hell...this is brillient! I see the whole thing in my minds eye. Great writing, awesome plot. PLEASE update soon!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This feels like an extremely promising start to a story. I am very much looking forward to reading more!