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for Damnation of Memory

by moirasfate

person KellyJCR
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am just dying to read the about the entrance to Avalon. This has been such a great adventure so far and I can not wait for the rest. Your chapters are so well written and come up it seems everyday. Patienly waiting for the next chapter isn't easy but I try. Well done!!!!
person nmos
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you should have way more reviews for this story.
i cannot wait to see what happens next
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really really love this story so far. It is fast paced and very very well written. Please keep up the great work, I actually wake up for work early in the mornings so I can check to see if you have updated while I eat breakfast. Excellent work though, really top notch!
person nmos
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sooo good.
person noeby
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
brilliant. yummy sex. looking forward to more.
person Savaial
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. It has depth, angst, friendship and romance. So good to read a work with depth in it. Good job!
person nmos
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
amazingg amazing amazing.
for serious.
person noeby
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg that was fabulous! How exciting and descriptive. can't wait for more.
person KellyJCR
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can not believe the twists and turns your staory is taking. The fact that you have Pansy and Ron together is brilliant. The picture is starting to clear and I can't wait for more. Well done!!
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow you know I normaly review but that is one heck of a cliffy. I've loved the progression so far cant wait to see what happens next.