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Soooo need chapter 4!!!!

the story is comming along nicely. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. this one like it's a between for two bigger chapters.
keep it up!

(Chapter 3) (it's not the ring I don't like, it's nosy, annoying, know-it-all Hermione I don't care for.)


So many layers to this story. Draco's obsession with Harry, Harry's own obsession with Draco, Lucius and Draco's relationship, Lucius and Narcissa's relationship, Lucius and Severus' relationship, Draco and Severus' relationship....

Thanks for clarifying that the imposter Draco is not of Draco's own doing. How Slytherin of him to take advantage of it, however. I'm intrigued by Narcissa's diaries...will we see anything from them?

Can't wait for the next update!

Another enjoyable story so far. Shards of a broken broom? Ouch. I'm in most disbelief at the height the obsession for Harry that is shown to us so far, not that Harry being a stalker isn't bad too. But the food that touched Harry's mouth? It is quite humorous to see Draco believing that he can make Harry fall in love with him, without plans to "keep him forever". I'm sad that Narcissa won't be able to be in the story, although I'm surprised at Lucius's humanity here and his humbleness. Narcissa was the one who kept him human in fanreader's eyes, so I look forward to his acting sarcastic and crude (in a dignified way of course) while still looking out for his son's best interests. I do wonder how you will approach this, as if you go for the jugular, I can only see that once one of them captures their obsession, they only serve to get more obsessed. I'm also interested in your tying this to Shakepeare? Great start so far.

So in a rewrite of DH, Bella killed Narcissa, and Draco and Snape escaped after sixth year? Although they couldn't have escaped very well as Draco had to gain the experience of acting like he was sleeping during the war. It is interesting, watching Severus and Lucius, simply because they are taking opposite roles than I thought they would have. Until you reminded me of Snape's own daunting rivals in his school time. I had first though Lucius would be overconfident in Draco, and Snape as always would off the spy's, the sensible idea that Draco will lose himself in this fight. I'm bracing myself for a possible unhappy ending, but I hope that you can teach us a few words in getting over obsession. As contradictory as "getting over" "obsession" is. On the other side, I like how you first introduced Draco's fainting as a fast beating of the heart (made me think he fainted from his heart beating fast while in Harry's arms). The self-inflicted bruises surprised me. It seems I won't be able to properly guess what will happen next, and I rather like that. Great job, and I look forward to more.

mmmm...ok you got me...i have no clue as to what is going to happen next...ten points to you lol

Soooo need chapter 3!!!!

MWAHahahahaa.. a Malfoy imposter, eh?? and Harry's met the man before in his dealings as an Auror or otherwise?? Ah well, we'll see soon enough.. I got the feeling that he's verymuch part of the plan Draco devised.. would be just too Slytherin not tobe. and who doesn't want to be rescued like the damsel in distress? I fyou want to make a hero take to you that is.. Hmmm, so Lucius is there but Narcissa is dead.. no wonder the whole insanity trip fell down on the family.. I'd like ot know what you want to do with that. Buch I have to wait as always *sniff* unfair...
Cat

ha ha, idiots X 2. I like how they try to out smart eachother. lol
well done!

(Chapter 2)

Nice! Mystery, intrigue, suspense...I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, although I do have to say I hope Harry leaves that ring off. Draco's doppelganger is interesting. I can't help but wonder if he isn't part of Draco's plan, a way for him to draw Harry to him. He's so obssessed with Harry that he must know that Harry, as an Auror, and knowing his natural curiosity coupled with his propensity for saving people, would be keeping an eye on the real Draco as well as the fake one. And now it seems, although it's Harry who's carrying Draco off to hosiptal, it's Draco who actually has Harry in his clutches.

Can't wait for the update!