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HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! god I was laughing so hard that I had to spit out my tea. I like it thus far. I was wondering though....are harry, hermione, & ron still gonna be friends or will it be only draco and the slytherins? I would think a mixture of both. how about the quartet....draco, harry, hermione, & ron? what ever u decide....i just hope its not gonna be like 50-100 chapters...that WAY to long. anyways, enjoying it thus far. btw, do u know any good stories in which harry is turned into a baby and someone (male) has to take care of them. "life from the start" is like on hold0or somthing.....??? dunno why....but yea cont this story...like it thus far.

I have always liked Snape raises Harry stories. Yeah, continue this. :)

You should really continue this its a great idea.

Good start!!! ^_^

Can't wait for chapter 3 to be posted :D

Jan

Sooo need chapter 2!!!

I really like this story so far can't wait for the next chapter

While you have a good idea going for you, the way in which you have written the story is not working. Rather than tell us something like the line

"Severus had adopted the boy when he was 5 years old after his relatives had all been killed in a car accident. He hadn't wanted to but The Headmaster had thought it best. In time Severus' reluctance had been won over by the boys charm"

why don't you show us through dialogue between characters? You really should consider a beta for this, not because its horrible but so you can develop the story with someone helping you and telling you what does and does not work. Keep at it and i'm sure you'll get better.